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Old 11-24-04, 09:53 AM   #1
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[[Verse One]]
The Highs Of Happiness Lie Benieth Lows In Time...
Only A Broken Minds Fall To Rise Achieves This Open Mind...
To Every Depth An Elevation, Empathy's Breath To Devistation...
Man Stands At Greatest In Embracement Of Deaths Creation...
We Are To Not Fear These Harms Though Our Years Alarmed...
Arms To Sides Hear Life On The Other Side, Leave Fears Unarmed...
Suicide Is An Easy Way Out Of You And I's Stressed Downs...
Loosen Lives, Drownd Them Out, Only The Weak Choose Die Instead Of Frowns...
Slit Your Wrists Shit, Nobody Cares About It...
Live And Lift From A Nobody, Learn To Bear Grounds Sticks...

[[Chorus]]
Enygmatic, Epic Speach Patterns Erratic...
Contradict The Wisdoms Forwich Have Scattern The Factions...
Live Your Own, Care Not What Nots On But What Could Be...
Fuck My Words, Creat Your Own Pholosophies...

[[Verse Two]]
Base Thoughts Away From Gods Sway Because He May Just Not...
Save Us All, May Hate Embrace You For Just One Day, See How Mistake Has Bought...
Live In The Clounds Sing Songs Alound With Timeless Grounds...
Its Rediculous Now In Modern Newance To Dance Along This Lie's Bless Sounds...
Jesus Christ Wasnt White Just Cuz White Said He Was...
Later Nights Darken Up Just As Does His Skins Set Seems Sunned...
Human Error Consumes And Abuses Air's Cold...
Breezes Wisper This Word And You Continue To Wear Old...
Seas Will Break, Crumble, Seep Spill And Leave Killed...
Soon As We Kill The Rubbles Beliefs And Believe In Free Will...

[[Chorus]]
Enygmatic, Epic Speach Patterns Erratic...
Contradict The Wisdoms Forwich Have Scattern The Factions...
Live Your Own, Care Not What Nots On But What Could Be...
Fuck My Words, Creat Your Own Pholosophies...
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Old 11-24-04, 09:54 AM   #2
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Just A Real Quick Write...
I Did It In About 30 Minuts So Its Alittle Ruff...
Maybe I'll Re-do It Later, I Dunno...
But For Now, Enjoy...
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Old 11-24-04, 10:17 AM   #3
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this piece was deep.good drop.gr8 vocab and structure.9.9/10.keep em comin'
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ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-24-04, 12:42 PM   #4
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Daym....
Lololmao, I Love This Girl...
She Stays Responding To Everyones Work...
Thanks For The Love, Stay Up Fem...
Upping For More Feedback...
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Old 11-26-04, 04:42 PM   #5
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Upping...
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Old 11-26-04, 05:27 PM   #6
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abstract big respect to you... serously you are talented dawg keep it up...
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Old 11-26-04, 05:33 PM   #7
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Thanks Mayn...
I Apreciate The Comments...
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Old 11-26-04, 05:46 PM   #8
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alrite man... What font style are you using?
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Old 11-26-04, 05:55 PM   #9
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??? Lol, Just Regular...
But In Size One...
I Just Think It Looks Cleaner...
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Old 11-26-04, 06:37 PM   #10
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aiiiiiiiiiiiiight nice drop good emotions and vocab mayne 9/10 deep shit here
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


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