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Old 11-24-04, 07:01 PM   #1
Ebonicz
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Many people clame they be tha rap jugarnauts
i don't give fuck if they got love or not
ill act quick to beat down show no pitty
this shit will so fuckin gritty it will spread the in citty
and all this just show y'all aint at ma level
ya'll think your tha shit i won't evan call you a rebel
see brah i got some fuckin tricks up my sleeve
so quite playin super man like chirstopher reeve (r.i.p)
or use your x-ray to see my glock
oh shit i can't wait till its cocked
i love tha sond of the gun befor ya poped
my crew march down from hiding just to kill
we love to slaughter it all in are will
its like its a leagacy to fullfill
but hell i don't have you kill you
i could beat to tha top while i thrill you
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Old 11-24-04, 07:05 PM   #2
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pretty good man flowed nice but u had basic vocab and ur structure was off a lil but it was pretty good keep it up

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