Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R

Good Luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-27-04 at 08:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Death has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 08:04 PM.

hipnoticz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 08:05 PM.

i wouldnt bump ya shit even if i was death warmed up...
rip punches to ya chest weazy ya out of breath...
pumpin deadly cemicals in ya lungs banned by sargent generals...
if i had cancer or aids i couldnt be more sick...
this kid lacks in vocab or ya just p-lain thick ...
ya rhyme scheme been played on more times than jenna jameson ...

checking in..................

yo your lil ass cant see me
just reading your rhymes make me "drowsy"

no way you could win in a battle against Death
its like a lost cause.......your going against tha best

you and your "English"people are a bunch of lil slackers
its tea time so put down tha mic and break out tha tea and crackers

i skip your battles while going down tha front lines row
mainly cause i dont wana read ya weak shit no more

i hit ya ass with tranquilizers filled with antibiotics
nigga stepping to me with da weak name hipnoticz

i just cant see how a sleeping pill can fry ya
to get rid of you all i have to do is swallow you with water

upping for some votes..........

Voted For: Death

How can hipnoticz even call that a battle verse? Only two lines of it rhymed and it really had no punches...no flow whatsoever other than in the line you actually rhymed...Death came decent wit a'ight punches and flow, but elevation is good for everyone.

Return the favor.

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Shit forgot the link...

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...757366&posted=1

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thanks. upping for some votes.............

upping..............

upping for some votes....................

upping for some votes.............

stop fuckin freepostin......................................

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