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11-25-04, 12:32 AM | #1 | |
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hipnoticz vs 4fil
IP: 568C C42A
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15 - 50 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting story mode........ topic = "Road Trip" Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-28-04 at 12:32 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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11-25-04, 12:33 AM | #2 | ||
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aight man...... theres the topic...... get writing and drop whenever... holla
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11-25-04, 12:33 AM | #3 | |
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4fil has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-25-04 12:33 AM.
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11-25-04, 01:08 AM | #4 | |
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IP: 29FE 5E1A
hipnoticz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-25-04 01:08 AM.
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11-25-04, 06:56 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 29FE 5E1A
ayo blood only do 15 bars aight cuz this shit is hard lol tha hardest topical ive ever come across aight you dont mind
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11-25-04, 02:24 PM | #6 | ||
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mmm ok but make sure you do it in story mode ok.... you know what that is??? 15 lines.... ok... but story mode k holla
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11-26-04, 06:48 PM | #7 | ||
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good luck.......
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11-27-04, 05:55 AM | #8 | ||
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have you dropped yet?
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11-27-04, 11:04 AM | #9 | |
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nah gonna do this shit tonight buzzy all day aight
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11-27-04, 05:09 PM | #10 | ||
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IP: 8EEC E82E
aight ima drop it soon
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11-27-04, 07:10 PM | #11 | |
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“Road Trip” (Story Mode)
~ it was a Friday, and it was the last day of the exams and of the school year, me and my friends went home and decided the we were going to go on a road trip, so we got underway that Friday night just before it was dark….. heading across the country side going for our road trip……….~
The Disaster………… We got underway, speeding off down the highway
Gazing at the sunset as we drove past the bay We pulled over for petrol but got straight back on the road The boot was full up with one hell of a load It started to get dark, and a little bit misty Only stuff within a few metres we could see Suddenly we saw some, lights heading towards us He was on the wrong side of the road and ad to swerve to avoid us We sawdust, as it was kicked up into our windscreen We swerved, toppled down a hill and into a ragging stream I looked into the back, to see if anyone was hurt
My shirt was ripped, and the car would not work We began to move and started floating down the stream We screamed, this was the end so it seemed The car hit a rock and we stopped, but the doors were blocked We smashed the windscreen and scrambled out, but the car rocked We all fell in and began swimming for our lives After a few minutes of struggle we made it to the side We Scrambled to shore and started gasping for air It was pitch black and we were in the middle of nowhere The long, cold night…….. The night had fallen, and I attempted to try calling
But my phone was broken, and the freezing air kept cooling We were cold and alone, and our wet clothes were another burden Dying of hypothermia it seemed almost certain We heard the loud Honk of a truck horn way above We new we had to go now because we had none of our stuff We started scrambling up the hill, amongst all the trees We could not see and still try desperately hard not to freeze The undergrowth was torture, and the thorns cutting at our knees And the leaves seemed like brick walls stopping us from getting free All of a sudden we were out and the moon was shining upon us And all we saw was a giant cliff gazing down on us We could see the lights of cars maybe 70 metres up We hesitated for a bit but decided we had had enough So we began to climb, slightly handicapped by the dark Afraid to look down, but then I suddenly got stuck Everyone had reached the top and I was stuck, thinking I would die All alone and still dangling there sixty metres high I screamed for assistance, and one of them came down to help me Helped me untie my shoe then we were able to climb to safety Safety………. I was helped up, and then we all shouted with relief We lay on the road side, panting in disbelief We saw lights in the mist, we threw out our hands A jeep pulled over and saw us wet and covered in sand He gave us a lift, yet we were silent in his car We got home and I was the first into the shower When I came out I saw I had a large cut on my chest Yet we were all bruised from having a close encounter with death I tried to sleep, but keep thinking bout my experience on the cliff Thinking back…… this was an unforgettable road trip |
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