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|  11-26-04, 03:24 PM |  #1 | ||||||||
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				10 lines - U LEFT ME HANGING-
			 IP: BC38 084D The night I was getting jumped u walked pass me like in the mirror of ur eyes u didn’t see my face in your reflection  But I saw da corner of your eyes u kept walking and left me get beatin, I thought u was my boi u left me with rejection I know u aint deaf, I was screaming your name, u kept walking with your head down, u didn’t even start to look back Like u didn’t hear my heart beating, I felt my heart was in an garbage bag and thrown away out of your background past I know u have an nose u didn’t smell my blood while its being erupted, u just left me on the sidewalk bleeding to death U act like I haven’t been there for you ever since we was lil.babies like an book of fiction, the past to u its just an myth I know u have nerves u didn’t feel my breath while I was screaming with agony, sad to see u living, but iam here with wings U even came to my funereal crying your tears out, but to me I don’t think they’re real tears from ya heart I don’t see Why u even came to my funereal and u left me to die without helping I don’t give them fake tears no credit at all Even if you came up here in heaven, my feelings for u will never change, full of envy and black, now iam gonna watch u fall 
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|  11-26-04, 03:59 PM |  #2 | ||||||
| New to RB 
 
 
 
 
 
 | IP: AB6B D514 I Feel U Dogg..if U Knew How Rap Was Supposed To Be Written Ud Kno That Bars Are A Factor So U Crackin On How My Rap Is Written To U Is Wack U Fuckin Poetry Ass Nigga Drastic Measures..is That Y U Wont Battle Cuz U Always Come With A Fuckin Story Pre-written...soft Ass Pink Nigga | ||||||
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|  11-26-04, 06:08 PM |  #3 | ||||||||
| mess with me get cooked 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 | IP: 5459 4882 eh like shut da fuck up.........................uppin for feedbacks 
				__________________  THE SLEEP & THE DREAM- Quote: 
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|  11-26-04, 06:47 PM |  #4 | |||||
| Rastafari Walk Tall 
 
 
 
 
 | IP: F226 2FD6 yo nice shit man, structure was off in places , but theme and lyrics was heavy. Peace 
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|  11-26-04, 07:14 PM |  #5 | ||||
| FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr 
 
 
 
 | IP: 8602 39CF Yea Mayn, Nice Shit, Good Flow, Structure Off In Some Places, But Over All It Was Str8...8/10...and That Dude Needs To Shut Da Fuck Up...knucklez...~1~ 
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