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Check in by: 12-01-04 at 11:06 AM

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teknikal vuez has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 11:07 PM.

mistah_tate has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-04 11:20 PM.

Imma -move this fool prick-, cause all his -raps is used-
Now tek *serve this dude quick* like *drive-threw fast-food* ~

-I move this bast too-, cause his audio -dreams un keen-
cause unless its *gay porn*, your *promos never seen* ~

Im -mean when im freein-. you just anotha -slut in the way-
cause i *run through your whole set* like *sprinters tryin out for a play* ~

Dont Say i Aint nice, or you gonna be ~fidgeting mistah~
cause he gettin *degraded by punches* like *boxing midget strippers* ~

i got some funny raps son, you cant elevate over my drop
cause like *Blind mountain climbers* you aint *making it to the top* ~


Ehh just a free... hope i dont loose..

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i previously predicted what this faggot would say
hes gonna start of with his punches that borderline gay

look ~bitch~, i stole ya style and i make it look so much ~betta~
grab ya ~sweata~, cuz i spit it so cold that i can switch up the ~weatha~

i'll snap this hos neck around so he wont have to witness his own death
shove a vaccuum down his throat so i can literally 'take his breath'
watch me get technical on this faggot and wire his brain to a computer hard drive
put a virus in this net geek and send him spasmin into overdrive
stab you in the chest with a church cross so you can feel the holy ghost
you cant brag or boast, i'm scrapin off your skin cuz you got burnt like toast

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

aight good verse man... i guess i should have tried. lol uppin for votes..

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u had a good drop to homie, uppin for votes..............

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

yea you too man.. def good.............................................. ............................

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up ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Yea Uppin My Battle .................................................. ............................

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god damn.......uppin the mothafucka.............................

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

Voted For: teknikal vuez

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to MISTAH TATE flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, TECHNICAL had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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Voted For: teknikal vuez

Yo i thought ya punchlines were better than the other dude. Big ups....

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