this is too a true friend who has always been there for me from once i joined dis site.......thanx a lot Love and keep up your GOOD work!!

Does he know he keeps me up at night?
All night with my pillow I fight
Does he know how my heart pounds?
When I think of him even when I’m down
Does he know how my emotions fly?
Every time I think I hear him cry
Does he know he is my one true dove?
Replaced never by another love
Does he know I love him so?
To the depths of the Ocean I would go
Does he know how I will cry?
If he ever left me for another girl (illusion)
Does he know how he has infected me?
He put the love bug in me and let it run free
Is he infected with this same love?
The answer is easy to see from so high above
I AM his angel sent from above to give him health, serenity and love
Does he know I'll Love him so?
Even if only he sees me here below?

Damn,wasn't expecting the response but i am very happy to see that ur feelin' like i feel.and no,i didn't know.I do now tho'.
poem was great.vocab,structure,emotion.all excellent.
10/10....i gotta print this one.

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

lol suprising wat u do find out tho lol thanx 4 da feed Love

aww, this was some heartfelt words right here, nice job girl, get a room you two..lol, and keep droppin, pc

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