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darkness encloses us like mist, and you cant see things clearly
your vision is foggy.....and your energy is drained and weary
and i want you to hear me when i say wat happens underground
...so i can astound those that dont know what its all about
under the surface can mean many things,a meaning that is cherishing
establishes upbringings that surpasses things like kings and queens
the real heart and spark of life happens under the surface
with people working hard for others with painstaking purpose
those above the surface dont comprehend their life has no worries
their life is easy and sturdy, but their souls are empty of purity
and basically under the surface makes the future for tomorrow
and make above the surface pleasureful while they live in sorrow
underneath they strive for meals, they shit and piss in stalls
while above is money hungry, furnished, with gold plated walls
its not fair but what can i say above the surface jus dont care
their vision is impared, their blind to the truth hidden there
our clothes..worn and teared, and are overly used like their rare
the rich claim "none to spare" we have to stand not even a chair
one day there will be a revolution to combine seperate differences
when we have our own constitution, full of open minded listeners
and i can picture all of this, but its nearly impossible to see
but you can think and always believe about lifes deeper meaning
to imagine seeing kids instead of stealing havin fun and playing
not have to hear gunshots or see useless news...another slaying
people above the surface do nothing they could help and they should
so they can prevent bloody extended man slaughters in the hood
but this is where it stands...and where it stays and hangs
rich and poor wont exchange shit cuz of feebleminded brains
not even broken fixtures, or puzzle boxes with missing pieces
or extravagent scriptures,baskets of bruised and battered peaches
we need to establish our speeches so our existance is significant
and structure our lifestyle so we can stop murdering baby infants
and i hoped you listened cuz you may become in these predicaments
forced trials and tribulations, carrying out never ending sins
dont forget where you stand,wat u can accomplish,your not worthless
just trapped in the warm truthful soul of living under the surface

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