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12-10-04, 04:06 PM
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'Moving Out'
IP: 3240 794D
Moving Out "the only real is here................displayin all truth......... cuz I don't really care....................if It Don't involve you...... I rap for nobdy....................and that includes a crowd......... because this ditch I dug....I'm finnaly Moving out................ Fiinaly.............Finally.............finnaly... ...........out....." N-D-E-P-..Took all my anger..and Geared it to you.. ..I realise its parenting..my fearing of you.. ..I guess I'm wrong..its expected to be guessing wrong.. ..its guess the money issue is why I'm dressing wrong.. ..giving you dirty looks..you said I'd realise it.. ..when I'm older..the grades these days I still hide it.. ..fuck putting vocab..I wanna use expression.. ..you can't teach a lesson..without putting any messege.. ..this my song..no one can change it..not even a topic.. ..just be glad I made it..the flow..hope you caught it.. ..every girl seems erotic..even the teasings easy.. ..got me paraniod..and I believe the VD..Treat me.. ..with a Beat..I'd come with the heat..I hope you listening.. ..even if you sick of me...you probably got sick from licking me.. ..from people throwin bricks at me..is how I built my empire.. ..something wrong with me..even If I know its true.. I'm still lying.. ..I guess I'm still crying..from past mishaps..with that.. ..I trust nobody..no verb adjeitive or noun..everythign's a trap.. "the only real is here................displayin all truth......... cuz I don't really care....................if It Don't involve you...... I rap for nobdy....................and that includes a crowd......... because this ditch I dug....I'm finnaly Moving out................ Fiinaly.............Finally.............finnaly... ...........out....." d-e-p-h-..I get a warm feeling..when I heard words sound alike.. I think the term..is rhyming right?..I'm glued to this.. can't put down a mic..thank god rap..I finnaly found my hype.. like I found my life..Hopefully I keep elevating..be a mountain kite.. man or mouse..I'd me one of the alpha mice..the house.. has two stories..3 chapters..don't read..the truth..you bore me.. all rap..is actors..motion pictures starring a nickname with that in fact..how will the genre get fame..multiply the sales.. well I tried and failed..I stay silent now..I rap my rhymes in brail.. that's how this male..told me still..Indeph's the only real.. keep it to myself..front to back raps..stashed in the shelf.. for this two black eyes...veiwed by noone else..deph.. "the only real is here................displayin all truth......... cuz I don't really care....................if It Don't involve you...... I rap for nobdy....................and that includes a crowd......... because this dug a ditch....I'm finnaly Moving out................ Fiinaly.............Finally.............finnaly... ...........out....." I-n-d-e-...moved coldfronts to front...nor move back to back the only real...songs..is truth back to back..Rap or poetry no use asking that..because we actually the same imagine that at least in my case..sway rap my way..we don't populate hate inlialate..my words bring us closer..even when miles away..so I make words of worse..with a platinum halo..people saying they kill pussy..like fucking u bastards fatal..but hey thats they hoes I aint gonna trip...I'm keep my state of mind stable.. like my voice is hoarse..I aint narrow minded..all my choises or.. talking all that crap...takl to my hand..when I own the force..Deph.. "the only real is here................displayin all truth......... cuz I don't really care....................if It Don't involve you...... I rap for nobdy....................and that includes a crowd......... because this ditch I dug....I'm finnaly Moving out................ Fiinaly.............Finally.............finnaly... ...........out....." -deph
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12-10-04, 05:19 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
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12-10-04, 05:34 PM
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IP: BCEA 3A7F
aiyo this ish waz hot i waz really fellin it specially the second verse
good topic nice structure good usage of vicab nice drop keep em cummin....peep ma battles they i gettin slept on dunny......one |
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12-10-04, 05:39 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
This is Fam reppin 2 the Fullest.....Nuff Said..
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12-10-04, 06:01 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 55DA 11D0
Although i don't like reading long pieces (cause most of them cant keep me focussed all the way through), i enjoyed reading yours. It came straight from heart, not too many big shot words in it (hate that), flow was good...everything was to the point
I get a warm feeling..when I heard words sound alike.. I think the term..is rhyming right?.. ^smiled when i read this...(thanks for making me smile btw hehe) Nice! Keep on dropping...can't wait to read more...
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12-10-04, 06:26 PM
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12-10-04, 06:47 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
damn, this is dope. you really expressed what you had to express.
Tc doing what come's natural. |
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12-10-04, 08:23 PM
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12-10-04, 08:58 PM
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12-10-04, 09:36 PM
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12-10-04, 10:16 PM
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12-10-04, 11:09 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 0825 899A
Check his sig this is eaxactly why i said Indeph is open mic king... this piece was just sick all around and im finally getting use to your structure lol
every girl seems erotic..even the teasings easy.. ..got me paraniod..and I believe the VD..Treat me.. ..with a Beat..I'd come with the heat..I hope you listening.. ..even if you sick of me...you probably got sick from licking me.. ..from people throwin bricks at me..is how I built my empire.. ..something wrong with me..even If I know its true.. I'm still lying.. Pure dope... the flow was amazing good wordplay and everything was consistent overall 9/10 keep dropping more open mics and ill be your number one fan 
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12-10-04, 11:14 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
you give the best feed lol
when the polls open vote this open mic award of december.. or vote urs cuz urs was dope
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12-10-04, 11:54 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1F19 D2B9
shit man you had a lovly flow to this and a greatfull and intelligent burst of vocab and wordplay to your keying......this was so dope...now make it audio or i will slap you...jk..
overall...9/10 |
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12-11-04, 12:05 AM
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