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12-11-04, 01:11 AM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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New Dopeness
IP: 5671 DBDD
off the upcoming a.i album me,saraan and feat legend pure dopeness hit the soundclick
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12-11-04, 02:13 AM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP: 28AD 5545
LOL...where do I begin...ahem
generally speaking, the chorus was okay...but all the cats singing it needed echo/chorus or doubles effects on their voices to make it dope...u guys can't sing...and regardless of what Ja Rule says, it's not cool to sing on track just because u got a deep voice or it's rap if you're out of tune umm...1st cat rappin was okay...voice was good, flow was fine...just didn't like the rhyme scheme too much 2nd cat...was okay but not memorable 3rd cat sounded like a fuckin robot during the chorus - wack...and the flow was pretty bad this was a good attempt...but the 3rd cat should have been dropped 6/10 1 |
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12-11-04, 02:26 AM
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IP: 5671 DBDD
lol saraan was added we will fix his voice he turned down the vocals a lil im gonna mix it again bear with me cuz im new to using cool edit and ill echo the chrous exactly how much echo should i put on it?
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12-11-04, 03:17 AM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP: 28AD 5545
not all echo...im sayin use more of a doubles/chorus effect...maybe mix it up with an echo here or there...it's just too plain
and lol @ u being the new Sinner...dissin niggas then askin em for help hahaaa |
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12-11-04, 03:50 AM
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IP: 5671 DBDD
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lmfao q you sigged my shit i never said you was wack ever i said you be acting like a bitch ass stalker sometimes and you know you do.you called a.i out we had to respond
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12-11-04, 04:32 PM
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New to RV
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IP: FF19 71D7
Common, Q summed it up pretty fair, gave it a 6/10, i'd give it a 5
I don't even have to explain because Q did it perfectly, only difference is i didn't like the chorus at all |
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12-11-04, 04:44 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
This was str8 but is...a rough draft
adjust the volume level wit saraan shit.. Overall this was nice...... no hate chorus is str8
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12-12-04, 02:39 PM
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IP: 4C68 C8F9
no i understand what q was sayin... my shit wasnt good at all did you notice how off i was on the chorus... yeah we need to fix that once my vocals get better editing and mixed better shit would sound better empire did good and so did legend hooks just aint my thing namsayin
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12-12-04, 02:52 PM
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New to RV
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IP: FA4C 80D0
nice!!....nuff sed
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12-12-04, 06:23 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
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Thats what i'm talkin bout
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12-12-04, 09:22 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: C7A4 9F0A
overall...dope...7.5/10...
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12-12-04, 09:23 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
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yea lol if i woulda known saraan sounded like that i'dda never rapped on it.....lol his voice irratating as hell
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12-12-04, 11:07 PM
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IP: 5A7F 9E8B
my voice is irratiting i know get used to it...
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12-13-04, 12:37 AM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
saraan is dope and who is janeen?and why was she trying to talk dirty to me on aim and now is in here?
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12-14-04, 04:12 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 6AD8 2CF7
I saw U asked me to check this out...
I think i know this beat?? Rock it? This hook isnt good... re work that First... Vocals arent mixed well at all... You got a cool voice tho... Flow is iight... Lyrics is coo tho Hook? wtf happened here this mic is an issue for real lol Second... Dope Voice... Flow started off strong and then as you went on shit fell off.....Decent shit Hook... better mic lol... still not feelin this hook Third.... Vocals are way to loud... voice is pretty coo.. You flow is very on and off... I cant catch how u were tryin to ride this beat.... Lyrics were coo... this was iight Coo Shit.. but definately not ready to be put on an album... If ur tryin to fuck with that... ur gonna need to rework a few things on here...mixing mostly.. PZ. |
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