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Old 12-11-04, 01:35 AM   #1
Flawless TeQnikZ
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emergency need help..reply quickly please

IP: 76BE EE8A

i wrote in the help but i really need some one to help me out NOW if they can




yo wattup fammo im looking for some help..
im new and im an alrite emcee i just got a few problems ive encountered.

1)what is rhyme pattern??
2)can u throw in short bars cuz i see alot of kats on the net do it..
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^^somethig like that..

3) and when im writing i seem to not figure out a rhythm to my shit can some one tell me or help me understand wat needs to be done..???

and does all ya stuff have to rhyme at the end of erry bar??
and can u have stuff that dont rhyme in some parts
eg.

iT was CrueLblOOd...FaM tryeD ta teLL these fake faGGots-
he said "mastA DA SCIENCE great MCs donT PANicK"-
AND i stayed PerfecteN my talenT like brooklyns finnest-
Twisted / KAOTIC mINDS make da perfect Alliance-

SO i COPPED my AAdvance,- No contest for CliP artists-
LOjiKK mOE KREATivE wit ganGA haCks like ron ARtesT-
GiveN'em BADLUCK, ruNNen thrU they emptY squads-
hARD knUcKz in Badland...muthaFuK MD....GOD-

I bruise niggUHZ egOS wita reign of terror-
while snuffen MonsterZ ina cocaine sweatshirt-


mY stylEZ off the waLL, the one and only LOne ElemenT-
iN CyPHA(s).. yaLL more or less cloned EMineMZ-
i beeN PT on the neT.... fulltime like MNS-
and down ta back this esse wit guns on INS-

yaLL dont make sense like whiTES wiT africaN names-
and u aint a Nemesis niggUH forget about dah game-
these nigGUhz talk shiT but its useless..So fruitless-
people be hoppen from my dick ta hambone dueces..u used ta..-
WorshiP this Born kiNG, not a nICE gui, I'll shoot ya-
and give ya GhosT an X-zA ExaM str8 from lUciFER-
MAKE ya deatH an EXPO, let's GO P's-SREWED-
ATMOS 7 times likely to spiT DEVI-ISH lyrikal kUnG-fU-
..................PEACE

the bolded part..
plz help me out with this its an emergency
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Old 12-11-04, 01:43 AM   #2
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