i dropped feedback on :

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1805878


Check it... just keystyled this in 20 minutes

Hook:

You think text isnt rap ? you have to write it before you say it
And if you couldnt print it down how the fuck will you make it
Rap is a written form, so therefore, you gotta read it to say it
And if you couldnt print it down how the fuck will you make it

The rap satan, i lack patience, so fear my bars
Talk shit, and you'll get hit, from here to mars
I spit text, so get vexed, die or bow down to me
Fuck all of you, my head is where the crown should be
I spit nouns you see, so step up for a crazy battle
Cuz all you rooks, will get shook, like a baby rattle
Im the illest when spittin, you bitches shoulda knew this when dissin
Cuz im bound to astound someones attention like the newest invention
This is the war of the crazies, you bitches to bored to amaze me
My skills are hurtin which is certain your skills are more of a maybe

You think text isnt rap ? You have to write it before you say it
And if you couldnt print it down how the fuck will you make it
Rap is a written form, so therefore, you gotta read it to say it
And if you couldnt print it down how the fuck will you make it

I spit sick, get ripped quick, all you vets are nitwits
Drop flames, rock lames, Bitches are on my hit list
Welcome to the sickest, open mic on this board
Test me, im zesty, I'll rip your mic from the cord
Fightin these whores, you really dont want none
Put six holes in ya chest and i aint talkin bout a shotgun
So if you say text isnt rap, then youre really retarded
Clown my speech, drown in a creek, fuck what you started
Cuz either way i'll end it, if you wanna battle, set it
Cuz nine times out of ten i'll leave you bitches deaded

You think text isnt rap ? You have to write it before you say it
And if you couldnt print it down, how the fuck will you make it
Rap is a written form, so therefore, you gotta read it to say it
And if you couldnt print it down, how the fuck will you make it


~!1!~

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uppin this for feedback

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The rap satan, i lack patience, so fear my bars
Talk shit, and you'll get hit, from here to mars

fimilar doctured up but still fimilar lmao i'll drop feed later.....

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Y.ou Know My Style 20 Niggas Wit 40 Cals

lol yea i said that yesterday thats what i was doing yesterday spent 10 mins on it then and 10 mins today to make it a super dope keystyle lol

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dopeness.........

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My Lines Are ILL yo

thanks for the detailed feedback lol

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this was tight dawg, it was a good read....

structure was good, ya shit wasnt to stretched for the most part........good vocab and shit was creative, i liked it.... and you speak the truth as well.... good drop dawg, keep tha dopeness flowin homie! ~1~

thanks for the feedback uppin for more

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Wow flow!! You seriously think of topic's that no one else would ever think of!!
Your vocab was very good in here, and your multi's was even more amazing!! I liked how you made the flow as if it was written for a song!! Not really strechted.. much prop's...

9/10

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i love you i.mind lol thx for the feedback

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ok but no text aint rap seven said it the best
'AND FUCK A TEXT THAT SHIT REALLY DONT MATTER/JUST CUZ YOU CAN WRITE A JOKE THAT RHYMES DONT MAKE YOU RAPPERS

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actually 95% of all rappers write down what they are gonna say before they spit it on a mic and dont say you dont do that cuz everyone on this site does i bet that... u might not read it from a paper when youre actually spittin but u memorized that shit enough to know what it says cuz u wrote it down first... know what im sayin... so text is rap and people who were TEXT!!! you as an example shouldnt diss where u started from cuz without doin text u woulda been ass jumpin straight into audio

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