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View Poll Results: RATE THIS....... IS IT??????????????
HOT FIYA 1 33.33%
I WANT U IN MY CREW 0 0%
MAYBE U SHOULD START YA OWN CREW 0 0%
OKAY 2 66.67%
WACK 0 0%
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Old 12-14-04, 08:34 PM   #1
DatBoiRob
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im lookin to get signed and if this verse isnt enough u can check my other verse. it is as soon as you click crews and collab section it is on the front

I spit a little something to get y’all excited
Get ya’ll delighted, whilst I get the fire ignited
Man, its so enticing Rob spitting supernaturally
Bound to be, King but for you this is a catastrophe
I’m masterfully, tactfully, radically emceeing
You best be agreeing, my rap material is pleasing
My status increasing, I’m like a worldwide wonder
My malice is teasing, and I’m formidable like thunder
It ain’t no blunder, raw talent and passion to my core
You couldn’t have asked for more, I’m the opposite of a bore
I draw peoples to me, and I pour lyrics out my sores
Lethal poison is within me, man this graphic gore
And what for? Just so peeps can get down to the music
A fusion of real and pretend, I make men mentally lose it
Diffusion and delusions, exclusions and inclusions
Musically I’m soothing, proving y’all welcome the intrusions
These happy illusions, making your perception kinda blurred
The words spit out slurred, as I concur to being absurd
What is that you heard? Me, admitting and pleading madness
I’m the meaning of badness, Make you feel the real feeling of sadness.

a deep peace
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Old 12-15-04, 08:08 PM   #2
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yo u got mad potential but u gotta come up wit sum betta lines than that it wuz a lil weak
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Old 12-16-04, 04:51 PM   #3
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You alright..... but its all good.... try out for V.R.
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