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Old 07-11-02, 09:06 PM   #1
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Gokfu VS Burnin

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15-20 bars
no beef votes
no crew votes
due tomarrow
no feedin off other verse
 
Old 07-11-02, 09:56 PM   #2
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u get crushed like i did to ya girl-i-confess/
u get lifted like wheight when i curl-and-press/
so dont stress how u aint the best, u showin im #1 of the rest/
and dont feed off me like u do ya momma's brest/
cuz nobody alive could gimme a test, when i battle in text, who's next?/
rhymes is spiritual like the koran or the bible/
they sing em as hymes for church choir recytles/
take ya written verse thats so vitle, for u to do without would be change in style/
u pussy, i drain u to make my own Green Mile/
ya shittier than bile, passed through a newborn child/
crapped ya pants when my lyrics went buckwild/
u need to recognize the skills, and how u aint ill, thought u were untill.../
i tore this faggot, cuz he got ripped, each PUNCH-line will bust ya lip/
u cant try to flip these scripts, so u better get ya Bic and write this down/
my Dai Gao sound wit verbs and nouns is pound for pound the illest around.
 
Old 07-11-02, 09:58 PM   #3
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yo sorry to freepost but yo can u vote on my battle wit lil d and i will vote on urs as soon as burnin spits aight
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Old 07-11-02, 10:02 PM   #4
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no problem. next time just e-mail me though.
 
Old 07-11-02, 10:48 PM   #5
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Smile since i'm on i guess i'll key some thin up right-quick

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ayo ayo:

Gokfu,lil fuck, you got a death wish? cuz now you die~
only way you'd be 'hard' if all ur bull-shit 'petrafied'~

ur lost, but it's aight, the site don't need ya~
i'll hit you with some ill 'shit', an i got 'diarhea'~
batlin me's just ignorant, like speakin' chinese in Korea~

ur whole style is wack an all ur rhymes be shitty~
if u had any less talent they'd call u P. Diddy~

Gokfu SO gay he expiriences impotence at a J.Lo event~
my 2 cents burns you bitches slow when i vent, like incents~

battle me,fuck, it ain't battle, it's genocide~
Gokfu cried when he found out Versace died~

bitch, i'll rip you like ur moms pants, when she's jumpin around on one of her crazy rants~
till she passes out and u call an ambulance, an they try to carry her fat ass away, but cant!~

ur wack, so i don't give you much thought, you don't worry me~
when ur pre writting ur verse ur like "yo dogg, don't hurry me"~

ummm, BLAH, i hate battling, cuz i suck at it VOTE!
 
Old 07-11-02, 10:56 PM   #6
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um both of u had some ok punches but gokfu u had such simple words in ur verse tha first 4 lines were confess, press, rest, breast but other ten tat it was ok

burnin well ur verse was ok but ur punches were a lil bit and i mean lil bit better ten gokfu

and again tis was a close match but vote goes to burnin

yo burnin check out my battle against lil d
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Old 07-11-02, 10:58 PM   #7
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umm ok here we go


my vote goes to burn due to the fact that his punches where betta

both verses where nice but i thnk yah need to put up yah vocab na mean

my vote go to burnin

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Old 07-11-02, 10:59 PM   #8
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aiight, and so every one knows, i keyed that in like 3 mins, cuz i figured that's what Gokfu did...
 
Old 07-11-02, 11:00 PM   #9
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and Dark Intent, thanks for not hating cuz me and Cam was dissin for a while, i appreciate it
 
Old 07-11-02, 11:03 PM   #10
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aight everything is all good aight



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Old 07-11-02, 11:04 PM   #11
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yo burnin just cause u had problems wit someone in tha crew doesnt mean u have a problem wit everyone in tha crew
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Old 07-11-02, 11:07 PM   #12
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aight good you guys, an me an Cam ain't even beefin any more,, it's just some cats are bitches and would've hated, it's good you guys aren't
 
Old 07-11-02, 11:17 PM   #13
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uppin
 
Old 07-11-02, 11:38 PM   #14
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Vote Some Body!
 
Old 07-11-02, 11:53 PM   #15
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Vote= BurnIn

Came with better punchs, rhyme scheme was down good... Multis coulda been better.. an ya w/p (even tho some was a lil playd) came out way better..


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i'll hit you with some ill 'shit', an i got 'diarhea'~
batlin me's just ignorant, like speakin' chinese in Korea~

^ lol 2nd bar was fat


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