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godfather has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 09:54 PM.

Tie your 'fists to cement', so you can come with some 'hard hit
punches'/
I smell victory cuz the only 'sure'-thing under ya arms is 'crutches'/
Makin more blunders than retarded stuntmen, my 'drunken-style' leaves you sober, face down/
cant handle 'daps', arm fall'n off from me giving you this 'pound'/
you found the path of death, I shatter text with claws wrapped around this bastard's neck/
U must be a 'square', u and the winners circle are not congruent/
heres my 2 cents, you must be willing to die with your mind cluttered/
Work on text design fucker then develop some rhyme structure/

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Devistation has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-04 09:59 PM.

This "father" is the uncles mother of his own daughter,
I will show him the "god", and show him how I mob slotter.
Now I will raise the water and lower your skills, under hills,
Keep it on the down low, thats where the belong, in landfils.
We ahve the same records but thats about to change, today,
You have to consume my verse and die in the range I say.
If you knew your own "mother", your dad would be overwelmed,
So hold on ya seat, as I take you in the next reality realm,
Show you how mch you are worth and pay to give you away,
I sold You worse than Icecream, on a dry, hot summer day.
These last lines I have to fill will show your real true side,
You have been under my wicked spells, only my laws, you abide.

Quick Couple Minute shit... It's decent..

G'Luck to ya'...

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Voted For: Devistation

dis shit was wun sided....

opener-dev
structure-dev
punchlines-dev
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
finisher-dev
enjoyed-dev..nuff said my shit is explained

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

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Voted For: godfather

ok it is refreshing to see noobs battle each other and not trying to jump rank before they are ready devistate no good punches or disses shit was just a whoe verse of shit talking struture was good so wasnt the flow and vocab was decent overall pretty good in those areas you really need to work on punches and disses cuz thats what wins battles 4/10
godfather this was better then ya last one i read a few multis decent disses no real punches ive seen in this from you or him flow and vocab is good 5/10
basically neither had punches or personals both just talked shit but in all i think god talked it just a tad better and that got him my vote

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Voted For: godfather

winner- godfather

nice battle

This "father" is the uncles mother of his own daughter,
I will show him the "god", and show him how I mob slotter.

nice punch

Now I will raise the water and lower your skills, under hills,
Keep it on the down low, thats where the belong, in landfils.

nice inner rhyming, punch was decent

We ahve the same records but thats about to change, today,
You have to consume my verse and die in the range I say

punch was weak, vocab needs improvement

If you knew your own "mother", your dad would be overwelmed,
So hold on ya seat, as I take you in the next reality realm,

nice punch

Show you how mch you are worth and pay to give you away,
I sold You worse than Icecream, on a dry, hot summer day.

nice metaphor, decent punch

These last lines I have to fill will show your real true side,
You have been under my wicked spells, only my laws, you abide

finisher wasnt that strong, u could do better



Tie your 'fists to cement', so you can come with some 'hard hit
punches'/
I smell victory cuz the only 'sure'-thing under ya arms is 'crutches'/

hot punch

Makin more blunders than retarded stuntmen, my 'drunken-style' leaves you sober, face down/
cant handle 'daps', arm fall'n off from me giving you this 'pound'/

nice punch, sorta stretched bar

you found the path of death, I shatter text with claws wrapped around this bastard's neck/
U must be a 'square', u and the winners circle are not congruent/

haha, killer punch, nice inner rhyming

heres my 2 cents, you must be willing to die with your mind cluttered/
Work on text design fucker then develop some rhyme structure/

strong finisher

god father won this hands down...DEV's verse was just gay...it had no punches...no peronals...his metaphores were a disgrace...and his flow was off...his multis also made his flow off even more...LEARN TO USE MULTIS KID...

godfather on the other hand had o.k. punches...his verse flowed better...and his multis didnt fuck up his verse...neither one really had personals...but at least godfather had some punches...

v/ godfather...

~1~

Voted For: godfather

DEVISTATION

This "father" is the uncles mother of his own daughter,
I will show him the "god", and show him how I mob slotter.
(DECENT OPENER, SECOND LINE KINDA WEAK...6/10)

Now I will raise the water and lower your skills, under hills,
Keep it on the down low, thats where the belong, in landfils.
(GOOD FLOW, GOOD USE OF MULTIES...7/10)

We ahve the same records but thats about to change, today,
You have to consume my verse and die in the range I say.
(WEAK BAR TO ME...IT WASNT AS GOOD...HAD FLOW THO...6/10)

If you knew your own "mother", your dad would be overwelmed,
So hold on ya seat, as I take you in the next reality realm,
(FIRST LINE PLAYED OUT...DECENT BAR THO...NICE FLOW..7/10)

Show you how mch you are worth and pay to give you away,
I sold You worse than Icecream, on a dry, hot summer day.
(GOOD BAR...WORDPLAY GOOD...FLOW GOOD...7/10)

These last lines I have to fill will show your real true side,
You have been under my wicked spells, only my laws, you abide.
(WEAK CLOSER...KINDA SELF GLORIFACATION...6/10)

AIGHT...YOUR VERSE WAS GOOD, YOU COULD ELEVATE SOME MORE...JUST OPEN YOUR IMAGINATION DOGG...GET RAW WITH THIS SHIT...LIKE ABOUT HIS FAMILY AND SHIT, GET NASTY WIT IT...U FEEL...OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS AIGHT...GOOD STRUCTURE AND FLOW WAS AIGHT, BUT SOMETIMES CHOPPY HERE AND THERE......




GODFATHER

Tie your 'fists to cement', so you can come with some 'hard hit
punches'/
I smell victory cuz the only 'sure'-thing under ya arms is 'crutches'/
(DECENT OPENER...MULTIES AND VOCAB GOOD...FLOW GOOD...7/10)

Makin more blunders than retarded stuntmen, my 'drunken-style' leaves you sober, face down/
cant handle 'daps', arm fall'n off from me giving you this 'pound'/
(WORD PLAY GOOD...FLOW GOOD...PUNCHES GOOD...8/10)

you found the path of death, I shatter text with claws wrapped around this bastard's neck/
U must be a 'square', u and the winners circle are not congruent/
(FIRST LINE WAS RAW AS FUCK...FLOW WAS GOOD, BUT THE SECOND LINE PLAYED IT OUT...IF THAT RHYMED WITH IT HARD IT WOULD HAVE BEEN RAW AS FUCK...8.5/10)

heres my 2 cents, you must be willing to die with your mind cluttered/
Work on text design fucker then develop some rhyme structure/
(DECENT CLOSER I GUESS...FLOW WAS GOOD...WORDPLAY WAS WEAK IN THIS ONE...7/10)

AIGHT...YOUR FLOW WAS GOOD...THE MULTIES AND PUNCHES WERE ALL SET...YOU COULD UP YOUR VOCAB IN SOME AREAS BUT NOTHING TO BIG TO FIX...EXCEPT FOR YOUR STRUCTURE...ITS SLOPPY DOGG...FIX THAT UP AND YOU WILL BE SET...


VOTE...GODFATHER

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Voted For: godfather

godfather won this one
fav line=Tie your 'fists to cement', so you can come with some 'hard hit
punches'/
I smell victory cuz the only 'sure'-thing under ya arms is 'crutches'/
good punch that pretty much ended the battle riight there

devistation u were alright jus go get sum ya shit critiqued
ur flo 3/10
structure 4/10
punches 3/10
no hate to ny 1 but god gets this vote ~1~

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return the favor on my shit gainst aurora i jus want that battle ended thnks

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