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Old 12-22-04, 12:43 PM   #1
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Why do structure matta

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i had a battle againt eclipse the boi voted on it or left feedback w/e sayin dat my structure was bad and it takes away from my verse so he voted fo eclipse even doe his verse sucked but if da verse goin to say da same thang if da structure bad or good den why should it matta
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Old 12-22-04, 12:45 PM   #2
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it matters because i guess its part of ya flow smell me like how u write n its easier to read dat way na mean well dat ma two cents i hope i helped you 1
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Old 12-22-04, 12:52 PM   #3
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you had no punch lines and your sturcher would bring out hose punch lines (if you had any) better but it was weak and i was that boi "boy"
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Old 12-22-04, 01:21 PM   #4
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i did have punches if neone else reads dis please check out da battle links n da sig da last one n tell dis fool dat i had punches u dont kno rhymes
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Old 12-22-04, 01:23 PM   #5
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hey yo.. clispe would be "Insane-to-Show" similar to CRAZY ACTORS/
Cuz I'm dropping punchlines you "Can't-Throw-Back" just as Re-Tired Catchers/

dere go a punhline rite dere sturcture wouldnt of brought it out it was already dere u must of didnt read it
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Old 12-22-04, 01:23 PM   #6
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well this fool knows how to type you need to take a leson lol and um if you knew who i was you'd watch your mouth before i teach you a lesson on structure and punches lol
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Old 12-23-04, 04:42 PM   #7
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well this fool knows how to type you need to take a leson lol and um if you knew who i was you'd watch your mouth before i teach you a lesson on structure and punches lol


ya audio sound like nelly or some shit.. I dont feel it
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Old 12-22-04, 01:26 PM   #8
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um......who are you talkin to
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Old 12-22-04, 01:27 PM   #9
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finally the yo bull shit stops and yeah you ii was talking to
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Old 12-22-04, 01:30 PM   #10
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um.........wat da typein gotta do wit da subject man get da fuck outta here
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Old 12-23-04, 04:33 PM   #11
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why are you trying to type in ebonics.....
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Old 12-23-04, 04:44 PM   #12
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she be typin in ebonics like shiiiiiit nigka
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Old 12-23-04, 04:46 PM   #13
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umm besides the fact it makes it look neat structure doesnt matter in text as long as it flows
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Old 12-23-04, 04:51 PM   #14
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