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Vietnam Flashbacks
IP: 0825 899A
a sickened feeling like my head has been caged by adrenaline rage
my face strikes its deadliest gaze glossed with a venomous glaze suddenly struck mentally dazed in this state I make many mistakes as my legacy is left in disgrace I sit shamed and red in the face lately it's gotten so crazy I truly hate the monster they made me at 18 went ta vietnam as a baby trusted kennedy not ta betray me constantly craving blood from the toxins in the shot that they gave me having these evil thoughts on the daily even god couldn't save me recently diagnosed with a case of post traumatic acid flach backs but these god damn quacks don't even begin to have facts because the government certainly covered every last track when they turned an entire fleet of patriotic marines into lab rats it was nothing ta laugh at as the doctors squeezed the syringe the fluid shot into my blood stream with a cringe then screaming begins a sudden strike of fire through the vein begins seizing ya skin accompanied by devils eating within and blood lust fiending ta sin We were secret so noone gave a fuck when we became corrupt our brains were stuck in rambling rage fa gooks we couldn't hate enough our time taken up with crazy stuff I still remeber the girl who prayed for us we raped the slut cooked and ate her just the memory is grave enough every day im plagued with stuff demons of bodies my hands beheaded lonely and neglected as the ghosts of the past attempt ta damn the present I suddenly awake in hell toppling down from the end of this painful spell my wife's in my arms eyes closed face is pale realizing it's too late i yell she falls to the ground a lifeless shell her abdomen bleeding where my knife impaled......... |
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IP: 3240 794D
i must admit man, this was pretty deep. i felt tha verse man. this was some tight shit. keep it up
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IP: 3240 794D
more feedback peeeeeeps..i am trying to up this shit up a little bit
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IP: 3240 794D
upppin this quit sleepin........................................... .
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IP: 3240 794D
come on yall----------------------------i can't get no type of feedback?
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: A34C 61B2
Post 2 links from 2 other battles that you have left good feedback in, or else this open mic will be closed..
-I. Mind
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