diss diss piss in a rapper’s mouth/
out of order, the fuckin’ toilet paper in the crapper’s out/
who’s gonna be around to find the south clean with another border/
shit, never mind, my short story’s gettin’ shorter/
i’m trying to earn 25% but can’t get a thing worth a cent out of a quarter/
perfect perfection pathetically projectin’ protection positively/
so what if i can’t rap, its a fact i have half of wack in me/
spinnin’ with a sin its simply fantastic i can win/
with just flow, and just know, i didn’t even begin/
the slim limb you’re hanging from is about to give in/
its a fucking shame you’re wack yourself still livin’/
not ill driven to know you suck as a rapper stick to religion/
you stoop pigeon you couldn’t stoop low, quit bitchin’/
style switchin’ ain’t like i’m givin’ you a chance/
to be splittin’ visions to fast to grow ears to listen/
or blood to taste with what i’m spittin’/
just imagin’ the wack attackin’ with all haters white/
and the respect after this mic is blackened/
with the best way to have an un-stressed day/
is to play chess and rest the gay/
cuz shit like this doesn’t go away/
its like a pest, no such thing as an insult, its all the same/
claim what you claim nothing will change/
tootsie sucker blow pop giver/
stand the fuck up, sit the fuck down, stand and deliver/
dopest controversy sliver embedded since dope "flow river"/
wackest icon since the word icon was wrote down/
i’m like tha wackest ill rapper after the birth of dope clowns/
i'ma rip raps wrapping cat's ass back to the first syntax/
take a hatchet and smash wack acts rapping attacks/
so sit with a pop popping pills on purpose/
cuz this is why wack sucks, the wack are at your service/

i'd like to dedicate this to peripheralbeauty...
i rhymed for you, but this ain't our collab


peace

~madd Professor~


ps. "flow river" was a rapper before any of the rap industry started

That Was Some Nice Shit Keep inproveN

I Have To Give It A

8.2/10

nice spit... but i couldnt really tell if you were dissin someone else or yourself..

you had a few good punches though...

frustrated-souls... misery and lust tastes-the same..//
take-tha-blame 4 much-hated-cold hearts, the wasted-stains..//
of loneliness luring an entity meant-2-b centrally curing...//
the wounded ego, now here we go, only this much pain is mentally brewing..//
what don't take our last breath, makes the taste of success linger..//
on the tip of ur tongue, wrong feelings r long lasting tha-stress stings us...//

Angel:

when you cry i'll wipe your tear
taste your salty sorrowed fear
when you need someone to hold
i'll be there to shelter cold
when your weak and start to fall
i will catch you, proud and tall
and when you feel you cannot stay
i will always chase those blues away

that was an iLL verse ya wrote... thank you for dedicating it to me... ^^^ that was for you... i can't wait til we do our collab...

remember to smile cause i'm always watching over you

ur madd tats some ill shit but ten again all tha hit u do is ill keep it up

__________________
67-30-46 combined overall on rb


keep lethal in thy beatin heart/
let thy tactix slip life falls apart/


vote on

what's up son

being wack never fealt so good..LoL

you call yourself wack but write ill
shit like this

when it comes down to it your nice

and that's real

holla

-1-

yo dawg that was some phat shit yo, that was iLL fa sho. Good use of words. Keep up tha good work man.

Peace

get on aim!!!!!

some well-liad out imagery, but sometime this piece came off like you were trading logic for the sake of getting your multi's in, decent concept and good vocab.

got to keep posting.
pzz.

madd professor:man those weak ass lyrics i will wipe my ass with them shits all of it was stupid

You wrote on Tank'em's post something along the lines of
"Don't write words just because they rhyme"
Or something
Well that's sort of what your doing in this piece

I'm out

blah blah, i know what i said, dawgs like tank'em ain't got skill enough to spell right or know what he's talking about without another MC tellin' him, this was a flow for the wack like him, and me, cuz i'm wack like that enough to have pride in it but nope, with tank'em its the other way around... but i'm not gonna get into that...

so upping