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Old 01-09-05, 03:23 AM   #31
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ok uppin this shit........ my pms aint workin neither...... im offended, lol
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Old 01-09-05, 02:23 PM   #32
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god damnit.......... 5 ups with no feed ^==============^
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Old 01-09-05, 06:48 PM   #33
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THIS IS BULL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLease!! i willl worship the ground u walk on if u give feed.... i might aas well amke a fuckin new open mic if no ones gonna crit this
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Old 01-09-05, 07:35 PM   #34
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fall at my feet den nigga......lol just playin dis kilo jus changed my name so i could battle. uppin da thread.................
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Old 01-09-05, 09:01 PM   #35
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Damn im Lovin This verses Especailly yours FJAW N e ways I Liked it all I could really relate To your Topic Mayne If i was To even mention my favorite bars out of yall rymes it would be

FJAW
it seems ya life is drownin in tha quicksand of hardships/
lost ya moms last year ya pops beat u n fill ya head wit shit/


And Kilo:
help me help your self, So we can find that key on the vacant shelf
but you keep persistin, i thought we were in love, but, youu wont listen


But hade Plenty More that I Liked really It was hot and i Hope Yall keep up the Good Work
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Old 01-09-05, 09:13 PM   #36
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Nice Topic,Like How You Started Ya Verse Off Woulda Been Hott If Wass On Audio.It Wass Some Vokab Through Out Both Verses I Like That.Kilo's Verse Wass To Simple Used Simple Rhymin Words,But It Wass Ok.Liked How You Stepped In Durin Tha Beggining Of Each Verse And Put A Heading.Iight,If You Had Better Vokab And Didn't Use "/" In Ya Lines I Woulda Gave You A 10 But You Didnt So You Get a 9/10 Simply Bcus You Had Some Errors Overall Nice Drop.....................
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Old 01-09-05, 09:15 PM   #37
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Yo Cus I Left Feed Now Run Me Mih Money................
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Old 01-09-05, 09:31 PM   #38
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Fuck-Jaw and kilo pretty good combo. yall have good chemistry
the whole thing flowed pretty well and was easy to read.
i like alot of the rhymes yall had in there. also yall chose a pretty deep topic which is usuall hard to write about but it made sense and went along pretty well. yall had good metaphors in there too.
ight son i dropped my feed back
here's my account number
gimme my 20 grand. lol XPETBK-34862
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Old 01-09-05, 10:35 PM   #39
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damn nigga u got all dat rv dough drop me some 2 lol just kiddin........uppin 4 feed
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Old 01-10-05, 04:44 PM   #40
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lmao at only gettin feed bcuz im givin out money
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Old 01-10-05, 04:46 PM   #41
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uppin........fux check out my new drop n spread da word on it cuz its been gettin slept on.....1
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Old 01-10-05, 11:17 PM   #42
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............
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Old 01-11-05, 01:46 AM   #43
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Two Words///// Gimme Feedback
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Old 01-11-05, 01:49 AM   #44
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One thug realized the hood channels are like wood panels
Hard to nail as retards fail go to jail and treated like camels
Burn and stress wounds and turn success tunes to crap
His blinging situation caused a stinging sensation like rap
Bees that swarm from trees hurt arms and knees sound the alarm
Harm come, he was sadly defeated and badly cheated out
Of his fame he dwindle in a swindle about street clout
A stony block feels like a phony stock deal no money
For his flow funny in society with a variety of dummy
Techniques from peeps and scum beats, life is crummy
Undergo combustion, thunder, and throw destruction on microphones
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Old 01-12-05, 07:20 PM   #45
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^^^^^^^^^ wat is that??????? didnt IE tell u to stop
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