RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 01-01-05, 12:51 AM   #1
Spoken Prophecy
Light Weight
 
Spoken Prophecy's Avatar
 
Posts: 353
From: chicago
Venting Steam!!

IP:

I throw flows at Pro Bowl level: like Favre's arm in cold weather
And I don't hide behind experience, howeverrr 'older knows better'
Bet you couldn't pull my chain even if it reached far enough to LET you
So Vets come to test, aimed 'for' my chest but they FORgetful:
I rock a Kevlar vest for protection, so here comes the next lesson
Aim for my head to dead me, if you driven to wreck me
Cause now Spoke forced to remind you WHY you respect me
My rhyme be that explosive kind, like the beats that occupy Dr. Dre's mind
I'll blow a hole through ya 'homez', '8 MILES WIDE'
Got that Eminem reference...but you never heard me say I WAS white
But turn out the lights, AIIIGHT?...Besides I rumble better at night
I'm not 'afraid of the dark': I scrimmage in ya parks, plus I'm 'hooded up', livin hard
And listen sharp, I'm far from fat, I'm just 'large' like 'fresh from the prison yards'
So from this day on...whoever steps this way is LIMPING off, u pissed me off
yALL feelin strongly that YALL got me 'written off', but this ain't taxes, bastid
I killed that noise faster than kids caught talkin in Church Service by they pastor
I admit SOME spit it hot, but it just GOT HOTTER..with every letter jotted
I'ma make VetS wonder why YALL bothered..
HE COULDNT WORK THROUGH MORE PUSSY THAN ME IF HE BOUGHT IT.
Like a judge who held a grudge on a thug, I'ma sentence ya:
Get-ridda-ya-quicka-WITH -VIDVID-SCRIPTURES- iM SINISTER!
Or don't you remember? Now my shoulder just got colder than the middle of December
u niggas is mixed up cuz ill rip any slut
Not even with a jump start to ya heart, is yall gettin up
My verbal abuse is endless-NASTY vicious..every sentence..im-ple-mented
u niggas rediculous hating me cuz im rippin shit what is it bitch
u rather me be wack than-above average but ill live though this
!
__________________
Where Im From! Cabrini Green!





Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


Quote:
Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
  Reply With Quote
Old 01-01-05, 12:42 PM   #2
Spoken Prophecy
Light Weight
 
Spoken Prophecy's Avatar
 
Posts: 353
From: chicago
IP:

uppin......4.........
feedback.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!
__________________
Where Im From! Cabrini Green!





Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


Quote:
Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
  Reply With Quote
Old 01-01-05, 12:57 PM   #3
Mentor
a.k.a prozak
 
Mentor's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,177
From: your walkman
IP:

really really good better than your other ones by alot i would give it 15/10
Send a message via AIM to Mentor Send a message via MSN to Mentor   Reply With Quote
Old 01-01-05, 01:32 PM   #4
B. Magik
Sam Dope
 
Posts: 3,499
From: STL
IP:

Weerd^^...Everythang you've been droppin has been hot man...I like the wordplay in this shit...Structure got a little crazy in some parts, but you picked it back up...good shit man...Return the fav and check the 2 links to the open mics in my sig man...1
__________________
B.M.B. Productions


CHECK THE FUCKING BEATS.

Send a message via AIM to B. Magik Send a message via MSN to B. Magik Send a message via Yahoo to B. Magik   Reply With Quote
Old 01-01-05, 11:23 PM   #5
Spoken Prophecy
Light Weight
 
Spoken Prophecy's Avatar
 
Posts: 353
From: chicago
IP:

thanx yall manit feels good to recieve some honest feed back
__________________
Where Im From! Cabrini Green!





Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


Quote:
Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
  Reply With Quote
Old 01-02-05, 09:20 PM   #6
Spoken Prophecy
Light Weight
 
Spoken Prophecy's Avatar
 
Posts: 353
From: chicago
IP:

uppin....................
4.............
feed back!!!
__________________
Where Im From! Cabrini Green!





Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


Quote:
Originally Posted by NarKotic
Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:07 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.