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Old 01-05-05, 08:51 PM   #1
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The Hustle

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(Verse) The only way I get cash is by selling merchandise/Ten dollar products I triple the price/ If you look at me my hands they’re always green/You guys would probably mistaken my hands for leaves/People act like I sell cheese to rats/Truth is I sell rodents to cats so pests better watch your back/Always taking and getting money before school even starts/I sell chains like a crack to retards/If can even sell nude to hoes/I can even sell Mya her woes/Who can sell toys like toys”r”us/ Besides me who can sell gas to a bus for five bucks a gallon and up/I’m so dirty you can call ma muck/It don’t matter because I sell nuclear bombs to Iraq so the U.S. is fucked/You guys get chew up like bubble gum/Then you get spitted out because you’re done/Finished compute, I read you like a book/You are cold or shook, face the truth and don’t even look/I sell like pawn shop and ya’ll get ripped off/You dumb asses buying 50% more than it cost/This is my business that gets me what I want/I’m lucky I took a shot at it because when I sold stuff I was like a bullet and launched/If anything I get you next to me/I’ll go in your house and keep your keys/I hate hoes because you need to pay a fee/ I love bitches because they do it for free/
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Old 01-05-05, 08:59 PM   #2
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Good flow, but to me that was about it, the content to me seems like you are trying to prove to everyone something thats highly unlikely "I sell nuclear bombs to Iraq so the U.S.", just try to be true to yourself in your rhymes, also, kick a little more vocabulary in there, this isnt really my song type but you got potential man just keep wtih it
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