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Old 01-10-05, 04:21 PM   #16
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one of da dopest collabs eva damn dis shyt was hot good shyt fellaz hope top hear more -1-
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Old 01-10-05, 04:22 PM   #17
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This may have been the dopest OM I've read ever. The wordplay was unrealistic and that opener wit Abstrakt and Buc, was a ill intro. I liked it alot. Funny this was Indeph's from Illnois. I'm from CT and so is Abstrakt.. dope piece man.. just hit up my sig.. BAttle with Terror2005, been up since bout.. 2 months ago.
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Old 01-10-05, 05:45 PM   #18
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this was hella dope,dope vocab and dope topical heads,werd this was dope,this should be in the rv award for the dopess open mic,good both of you,
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Old 01-10-05, 05:46 PM   #19
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chea that shat wuz dope. i cood picture tha shit in my hed. it wuz dope how it went back n 4th frum indeph 2 abstract. good rymez, werd
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Old 01-10-05, 05:47 PM   #20
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dope.definately dope. hot ass topic with tight ass rhymes. 9.5/10
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Old 01-10-05, 05:48 PM   #21
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aight..this was a very creative drop..both yall sick wit the open mics....nothin changed here..i like the way yall both mixed into all three verses..and the concept was good..abstract..nice lines mayne..some of yall vocab was just amazin......the structure was spot on...some nice multies to make ur bars...some nice rhymes in there too..

indeph...another strong open mic..once again the structure was good...some nice lines in there...some nice vocab again...really feel yall on this one guys....yall both stayed on topic all the way through....i cnt really fault ya..all i can say is keep em comin..i enjoyed this one......keep it up..pz
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Old 01-10-05, 05:53 PM   #22
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yo this one of the hottest shit i read on this site yo the flow was sick very creative and dope. yo the radio conversation and the damn vocab is sick. These are some real lyrics yaw took ya time wit it and kept it original nice concept 2


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Old 01-10-05, 05:55 PM   #23
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hell yea dats wut im talkin bout dat shit was pretty damn ill yall keep it up and stay up homies ~1~
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that was hella nice.....oh shit..................where do i begin....

deph: you was ill with the lines...none stop hot lines i couldnt stop reading...you just lack emotion..you ahve some but it osunded good becuase ABBy got mad emotion....you guys are a good couple....

STRACT: you had mad emotion...nice emotion i can hella feel everything that you where feeling.....you should do another collab like this again...i like that radio shit....
you also had the crazy ill lines but you had lots mmore emotion...


all in all...the best collab i have seen thus far...the are like a perfect couple...where one lacks the other makes up for.......nice.......
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Old 01-10-05, 07:16 PM   #25
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Whoooooooa...

shit was dope mayn ...
nice topic to it also, both of you
did a hell of a good job on this piece
..*probably should be the OM of the month*..
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but anyway dope shit tho fasho

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Old 01-10-05, 08:11 PM   #26
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overall this wuz a nice piece.....

1st verse- the flow got off on some points....8.5/10
2nd verse-some stuff sounded too repetitive.........9/10
3rd verse-flow and structure got off on a few spots.........8/10

overall- nice piece, my favorite wuz the 2nd verse whover that wuz/i think that this piece is very good, but wwill not be able to win the award for best om, unless noone brings any hard comp......just cuz i said a lot of bad stuff about this doesnt mean that i didnt like it, its just how i am, i belive that everything can be improved no matter how good it is, im a critical person.....this was a good drop, i'd rate it.........9/10

*i wasnt feeling the chorus though*
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Old 01-10-05, 10:27 PM   #27
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dis shit was goooooood I liked it this has my vote on winning it this month here is what I want it to win for right her.


Yo Yo Yooo, Its Ya Boy Buc Keeping It Hot In CT... Today For Ya Enterainment Pleaser We Got None Other Then Ya Boy... Abstrakt!!!
Abstrakt: Ayooo, Whaddup Fam... Its Ya Boy 860 Repping Back To My Home... CT One Love.
Buc Star:Ya Ya Yeeeeah, Thats Right Never Forget The Home Town. So Wha-Whadup, You Gone Spit For Us Or Whaaaaat Man???.
Abstrakt:Haha Of Cooourse No Worries I Got This... Gimmy A Beat I'll Tear It Up Before We Get Into The Interviews.
Buc Star:Aiight Here Ya Go, Sawl You Play Boy.
Abstrakt:Aaaw Shit, Straight Beat I Got This...
What, What... Ayo,
Abstrakt One Mic One Track To Lite Blaze To Suns Path...
Coincide The Broke Glass My Life Whole In Tact? Ya Never Was That...
Strickly Av's Beef Weed Tounge Quick When I Stand Like Deph On His Knees...
So Many Fake And These Street Take To Kids Like Him, Pleeeeeease...

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Old 01-10-05, 10:53 PM   #28
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damn!


This is dope. Original like wat. I had to re-read it to understand it 100%. but.......
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Old 01-11-05, 03:42 PM   #29
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this shit is nuthin but illy vanilly kids. i mean fuck if i was gettin my own record label i would sign yall.... but i dont yet but man that shit was hot.... it had some hot concepts and different styles so u didnt get bored of reading it since it is so long.... but i liked that shit for real....

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Old 01-11-05, 04:10 PM   #30
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ayo that was dope still... I had to read it like two or three times to really grasp the concept but it was good!!
I like the combination of both of y'all, I dont usually read open mics(as a matter of fact I think this is my first or 2nd) but it was nice...keep it goin yo!!

I dont know if I should say this is the best because I haven't read any other yet but I think it's pretty good from what everyone else is saying..
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