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Old 01-10-05, 11:52 PM   #1
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Where Im from!!

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Where Im From!
Absorb the Atmosphere
open ya mind in deep conteplation
giant tenement buildings
embrace the stratosphere
tower over and look down on the population
with resentment,as it imprisons
hope and ambition of children
there visions diminished..old heads wishin,
they could get there youth back and relive it
dark alleys smell the stench of death wrenching at ya nerves
gun shots heard,a body dropsand hits the curb,
tears of a mother fall , however nobody says a word
sirens ring,birds groan instead of sing.,
here there is no pleasant thing
everything is everything but it all amounts to naught,
the rising of the sun brings more killing ,
mayhem and robbing sprees,the police they dont do a thing
and death sits back and taunts



There Are No Children Here
only adolecent bodies,with adult minds
wisdom beaten into there skull,override
childhood dreams and wishes
the only means of knowlege is to stay alive
they heard and saw things that was before there time
so they proceeded through the earth but wasnt ripe,
the seed that grew up fast
weary and scarred through the cement of life
they became the nations future,before they could develope a past




my home from 4-17
The Factor of Fear
Meet the parents at last
years of bottled up child hood
lingers inside,and ignites wild blood
that doesnt coincide,with the priorites of life
parents become archmen to childrens hearts when
they abandon them in desolateapartments
theres no food in the house so the lad is starvin
he reaches out To God,but when God grasp his hand
he snatches back,because he doesnt comprehend
why hes been raisin his self all this time
and his parent act like kids
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 01-11-05, 01:24 AM   #2
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why would u take a picture of a housing project if u dont live there..................
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Old 01-11-05, 09:02 AM   #3
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i dont know ? maybe beucase i live THERE!!!!1
LMFAO i say before the third picture my home form 4-17
did u think i was talkin about the play ground out side the home or the housing complex? lol yes man i used to stay there Thats where Im from
or i guess u didnt read the title of tis thread either or mayb eu want attention so bad that u woul dplay dumb lol stupid motherfuckers
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 01-11-05, 12:10 PM   #4
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alright and the point of this was....?
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Old 01-11-05, 08:37 PM   #5
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just to show niggasd where im from
i dont see notin wrong with it
but i for got thisi is wrap verse yall dont even know true lyrics
well most of yall with a excepton of few
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 01-11-05, 08:43 PM   #6
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^your 0-1...so whats the definition of true lyrics to you...?
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Old 01-11-05, 09:05 PM   #7
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^it be gangstuh of coarse.

Where we mofuckas be talkin downn and durty like dem hurr. Ya Hurd? Payce mofucka.

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Old 01-11-05, 09:55 PM   #8
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well I never lived in the projects but had a aunt that did and hell yea it is pretty bad especailly in fl dam but oh yea ok pics I think. ????? so confused lmao.
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Old 01-11-05, 10:04 PM   #9
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lol........thanx?
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 01-11-05, 11:39 PM   #10
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he got those pics off the internet........................

those building look pretty new...............................

and those pics look like u cut stuff off..................which probably had the place of were u got it.....................

and u gotta buldozer in one............so it looks like those r new.................

and u said u used to live..................

and i've never seen a place in chicago were theres no skyscraper in the veiw..............

so stop tryna make it seem like your from the hood.....................

who cares.........................it dont make u a better internet textcee
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Old 01-11-05, 11:42 PM   #11
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he got those pics off the internet........................

those building look pretty new...............................

and those pics look like u cut stuff off..................which probably had the place of were u got it.....................

and u gotta buldozer in one............so it looks like those r new.................

and u said u used to live..................

and i've never seen a place in chicago were theres no skyscraper in the veiw..............

so stop tryna make it seem like your from the hood.....................

who cares.........................it dont make u a better internet textcee

ACTUALLY YES THOSE ARE THE PJS AND THE HOOD AND YES THATS CHICAGO ON THE SOUTHSIDE SO YES IT IS
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Old 01-11-05, 11:53 PM   #12
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wtf...........omg........
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Old 01-12-05, 12:05 AM   #13
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ACTUALLY YES THOSE ARE THE PJS AND THE HOOD AND YES THATS CHICAGO ON THE SOUTHSIDE SO YES IT IS






ok......new york boy
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Old 01-12-05, 12:23 AM   #14
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ok......new york boy

LOL IM FROM THE 90s SOUTHSIDE CHITOWN THATS WHY I KNOW WHERE ITS AT LOL I BEEN IN NY AWHILE NOW THOUGH
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Old 01-12-05, 12:34 AM   #15
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Kids 4rm Everi Wea On Tha Map....
1st Cali
2nd Than Ny
3rd Now Chicago Lmao Chose A Resort Cus...............
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