yo im new to audios..about 3 months...so bare with it lol....eney tips or feedback would be much appreciated..and DROP YA LINKS!!

www.soundclick.com/kaveh7
"Flatlined"


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HipHop- ThirdSelf feat. Calamity
C.A.L.I-Terrorist

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ok you always give feed on my shit so i gotta return the favor honestly too you got a good flow and decent vice lyrics could be better but theyll step up with practice you need more emotion and to learn how to read a beat certain beats are made for certain shit this is a beat you gotta start slow on then get mega hyped i used this beat when i beat kingz like a month ago overall you have potential a little work and i see you being dope keep dropping .

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thanks man...and thanks for the tips, ill work on it

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yea you got it- just keep doing it... basically what cali said... all you need is polishing, and maybe step up a little on the lyrics- but you got the idea definately... keep droppin.

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i definatly will..thanks

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i like the beat...


ur flow is better than ur delivery ...u cudda owned this beat, but u didn't...jus come off as nice...ehh...


need more emotion to flow to a beat like this


u got potential


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Hook mixing is terrible, too loud shit effects, but mixing comes with practice
flow is good, delivery can be improved tho. your verse matches the beat well
improve your quality and lyrics and u will be one of the tops cats here

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