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01-26-05, 12:18 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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Beliefs Of Expression
IP: 88C4 C811
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never fail, to explain that of thy inner soul look deep inside, as my warm heart smiles with the words, of love and that of grief expressing the unheard views of dis belief with each thought explained, a new seed is born an outgoing vivid mindest, leaving those torn who sworn, to not hold back inner feelings promised god, the honesty of his children and siblings thou shall not hold back, for honesty shall pay never feel harmed to express, what you must say get it off your chest, which do not be afraid if you do not point out your views, on lookers will avaid into your soul, and wonder that of what your thinking have your mind possessed, quicker than one whos blinking your reputation is sinking, your known as a liar your loving values, are destroyed, burned in the fire i admire one who speaks out, and gives lessons to those of who, hold back feelings and expressions
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01-26-05, 01:46 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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wow valor, this poem is beautiful, nice flow to it, and the emotion in your words gives me goosebumps, you have an old~world style to your writing, like your an old soul, or way ahead of your time, keep up with the dopeness fam..1
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01-26-05, 01:55 PM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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i liked this alot...it was deep and the flow was great...keep it up ~1~
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01-27-05, 09:52 PM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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lol word thanx fluidmoon....uppin
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01-28-05, 11:08 PM
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Is F'in Bored
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that was one of the best pieces i've read in a while and the form didn't seem like rap, like somehow you evolved beyond that level into something greater. keep it up
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