I get reckless wit words relentess when hittin dem birds
I swiftly come thru and steal ya spot *Silent Killa* yet still heard
Potent comments toxic drop da illest lady emcee ya gurl Bri da lyrical goddess
Proverbs im a prophe-c speak scriptures ill wit content
Desolve ya comments lackin in wordplay these bitches speakin outta context
Drop bombs i rock ones top this one wit my next spit im untouchable
Split wit hits unlike most chicks ladies un*fuck*wit*able
NB's first lady done touched domes I clutch and crush bones
A problem when fems hear da newest member's Bri cuz i make heart moniters
sound like dial tones(Flat)
Da reason your hopeless when spits slurred
Hypnotiq concepts hit ya optiqz ya visions blurred
This RV chick thought she was nice now dont post
I do less da boast im fresh wit words now check ya pulse
Connect ya hopes disect ya flow plesant my presence infect ya thoughts
Da best battle wit Bri is da one not fought

can i get some feekback plz

hey u got some ok shit needs some elavatin no hatin but u need ta start concentratin and start creating dat ill shit just keep on goin' til ya can't spit and it'll take a couple tries but put in some multi's u know what da meanin be, u feelin me???

oh aight thanks hood i usually do betta den dat but im kinda tired... more feedback

ooooooooooh i heard about u....anyway tho.................
ya structure was "okay" nothin too special in this piece but seein to tha fact u only got 4 posts this was decent.don't worry bout makin tha perfect piece at tha moment all u gotta do is focus on the fine points. say for instance in one piece u focus on multies. tha next u focus on punches or vocab etc. this'll really help you alot in the long run and as you get better you can take the skills you develop and just drop ill shit. return da favor. 1.

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thanks... hol up what u hear about me??? more feedback plz

nigga from my ol' hood name Daiquan tol me bout u.

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yeah bri u r nice wit urs but just elevate a lil mo & branch out onto different topics 2 spice it up give us a lil bit more variety fo sho ight ma holla