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Old 02-03-05, 10:49 AM   #1
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Whips n Chains ! (Da Profit Remains)

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Hook-
I Got Whips n Chains
I Aint Talkin Bout No Sex Toys, I Mean Da Chips Remain
In My Pocket, U Cant Stop-it Or Knock-It
Dis Herez PROFIT ***T-Uniiiiiit***

Niguhs wannabe lyke 'T' but dey aint pushin no 'UNITS'
Niguhs want me ta repp they crew cuz of this NU-SHIT
cause my rhymes stay in ya mind like when GLU-STICKS
i commit verbal crimes ta take dimes off YOU-PRICKS
i got some NEW-KICKS lyke i work at footlocker! but HEY........
ima mark the scores for ya verse with HOVA'S rap name without the 'JAY' (Ha Ha)
you aint never met a TEEN with a TEAM as fresh an CLEAN as MINE
cause da profit postin out everythin u wanna see lyke da NEW YORK TIMES
Ima MASTERMIND Like a winner on a Tv GAMESHOW
cuz am pimpin like big daddy kane an your like 'pac' n dem cuz everywhere u go you fuck da SAME-HO


Hook-
I Got Whips n Chains
I Aint Talkin Bout No Sex Toys, I Mean Da Chips Remain
In My Pocket, U Cant Stop-it Or Knock-It
Dis Herez PROFIT ***T-Uniiiiiit***


Am already da prince of Audio n i dont own a MICROPHONE
so when it comes ta TEXT i fuck VETS an the bitches wont Leave me ALONE
im laced with CHROME an intimidate with my Speaches TONE
an i'll give niguhs 5 second ta Reach HOME
before i BLAST like an AFTERMATH cause my WRATH causes much HURT
they say i'm more revealing than a hooker in a Mini SKIRT
i murderd KURT so there would be no more NIRVANA
da kid brings more controversy than a Tv DRAMA
i aint frum GHANA but i got AFRICAN in my BLOOD
an with one lil flick of a switch ya areas wide open like i Popped Da HOOD
they say am No GOOD An always up too SOMTHIN
but i say you WOULD IF YOU COULD an be lyke me FRONTIN !

Hook-
I Got Whips n Chains
I Aint Talkin Bout No Sex Toys, I Mean Da Chips Remain
In My Pocket, U Cant Stop-it Or Knock-It
Dis Herez PROFIT ***T-Uniiiiiit***


iight dat hova line iz simple his rap name without da jay would be -z, meanin Z Minus, ya feel?

an da popped da hood line meanin popped da hood on a car, metaphor kinds of thing ya feel

Last edited by TuNiT : 02-03-05 at 10:53 AM. Reason: added the hook ta da end an forgot ta add da explanations
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Old 02-04-05, 04:25 PM   #2
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some lines were too short and some were too long your punches were good but the flow
was kinda scattered at places all around good verses though.
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Old 02-06-05, 07:51 PM   #3
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sounds like you kinda ripped off g-unit no hate just makin a statement
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