What up with all these remixes
ya'll actin like bitches that'll be left with stitches
if you want a song to remix then bitch pick this
this is like a free show with no tickets
we got fresh emcees and bitches with nice hips and titties
and this ain't just another rap song i'm singin'
it's somethin' more it's a whole brand new style i'm bringin'
it's something you can jam to when it's in ur walkman spinnin'
shit just starts to fly when your batteries die
that's why i apply more thought than normal emcees'll ever try
someday my shit'll fly and i'll keep at it til' the day i die
i just put in as much wisdom
as u put in with your suppose ta be constructive critism
ya'll steady using your mouth for the pissin'
listin' all the shit my song was missin'
that's leading me too the shit that'll leave me back at prison
well atleast i got a creative way for my dissin'
ya'll probably will leave this page without trying ta listen
will do it see if i give a fuck go ahead leave this thread
but if you don't leave some feed then instead
you'll wake up with a missin' head
those kind of thoughts will make u not even wanna leave the bed
so c'mon do what i said and end up dead
but enough with the hatin' and simple vocabulary
let's get to the respect N' complimentary
and don't even think of growing weary
after you read this rapped out documentary
cuz people will still hear me after a full century
so talk that shit come 'N test me

no hate but i wasnt really feelin dis drop...its jus plain to me...6/10 cuz i feel it was simple...you put dis one together in like 5min didnt u?...lol...j/k

and ummm...hit up my OM mayne...its simple too but its a good read (dats what peeps say)...just check it out and return tha fava...stay up

and remember...no hate

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eh... if you were refering to me... then you can suck a dick but like dolla bill said...

*chop*

cut that yo. 3/10 no hate tho.

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nah i wasn't referin to anybody it's just a title, i couldn't think of any and thanx for atleast bein gentle with your critism i hate when somebody just get's so cocky that it's pretty much more of talkin shit than decent feedback hey i'm elavatin' i can't get better without trying to improve and i could see where i got too basic but i don't want to much complicated words other wise it'll be too complicated

That's what I was talking about.

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oh no i really don't have anything against remixes (not like i didn't do it myself) it's just ever since someone put one out everybody else is fillin' the whole page with em

eh... cats been at me since I put out Breathe which was Best open mic of October... everyone wanted to do a remix so we finally did one... lol... it's been in the makings.

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i see that's cool hey can u just help me to touch up with my rappin skills cuz as u could somewhat tell i am a little unexeperinced, i've seen wacker and i've seen better but i just need all the tips i can get if u know what i mean cuz i really don't wanna keep on goin with the same shit

iight... my MSN is rhowe13@hotmail.com

if you got MSN messenger I can attempt to help ya.

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ay i was tha 1st person i knew of that did a remix cuz i hadn't been here real long but that was waaaaaaay back in Dec. i had been messin around wif dat 1 song n i just decided 2 post tha lyrics. if i get audio i'mma do that but anyway

it's already been said.......this was kinda basic. it was okay for a freestyle but some of the lyrical content was off and vocab couldda been better. i seen some of your previous shit and i can tell u did this in like a couple minutes. 4/10........return tha favor.

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uhh... this was ugh... needs alot of work.. really wack and could of been better.. go elevate.

what u think is better my previous shit or my newer shit??? just curious

tha previous by far

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