At a party, getting late, and it’s time to dip
You wit ya girl, no license, can’t drive for shit
You’re feeling pretty tipsy, before you run out the door
You here, “You need a cab?” Hell naw, I’ve done this before
You peel out, the hell wit speed limit today
I can save some time Im only 20 minutes away
But it’s the dead of winter pouring down the powerful snow
And you meet Ya friend Bacardi from 2 hours ago
But everything seems straight you wanna stop at the crib
Lay it down, wit ya girl, pop in a flick
The speed limits 25 and your doing like 43
But the way you see it its ok I drive accordingly
You turn and place ya hand on ya females lap
She’s feeling hot so she undoes her seatbelt strap
As you wind the next bend to finish the long day
Your way too smashed to catch that you’re headed the wrong way
You slam the breaks down heavy and hold the wheel
But it’s too icy and you plow into an Oldsmobile
Metal twists, glass shatters, that’s the last you see
Lights go out your unconscious fast asleep
You awake suddenly and turn to see where you are
You can’t believe it you been thrown like 40 feet from the car
Still drunk you roll over and prepare to hurl
A thought then hits you like a ton of bricks “Where’s my girl”
Hold on real quick I guess she must be straight
Cuz I seem to be ok except for cuts and scrapes
You fumble around a second and then you turn to the left
Now it seems there’s screams somebody’s burning to death
The pictures horrible, it makes you gasp and cry
You attempt to help the 4 people trapped inside
As you arrive on the spot you see 3 boys and a dad
Only 1’s alive the others died from poisonous gas

Little boy crying, cars flipped, hope is lost
And it’s about to blow, from all the smoke you cough
You dash frantic running from the deadly crash
Until you hear the big explosion sounds of heavy blasts
Amidst all the chaos there on the side of the road
The slumped body of your girl friend, inside you explodes
You lay her down, touch her chest, the air is leaving
Glass embedded in her face, man she’s barely breathing
You burst in tears kiss her hold her close and hug
Her beautiful long brown hair soaked in blood
Why me, why this, God it can’t be true
Suddenly ya girl awakes and she answers you
She mumbles "listen babe I think it’s time you know"
"You have a seed deep in my belly and inside it grows"
Then you sob some more, you don’t think you can take it
And she says "I’m sorry honey I don’t think I will make it"
"Well the baby thing," she stutters, "that was a surprise"
"Shhhhhhh c’ mon baby I don’t want you to die"
Her last words are, “I LOVE YOU,” and then she stops breathing
You’re tossed aside by paramedics who administer shock treatment
As the cops question you profusely ask who you are
Then they read your rights and toss you to the back of the car
They inform you of the obvious you’re the one that survived
The Smithfield’s are all dead now none are alive
The Smithfield mother came and cried, fell to the floor
"You killed my 3 sons they were just 6, 7, and 4"
Then she cried about a finger that had carried the ring
Saying "me and David were to be married and spring"
Looking back you think of the decisions you’ve made
Now 5 people dead and your in a prisoners cage
Laying in ya cell and thinking bout the dreams you had
You suddenly reminisce "hey you need a cab?"

#1 Free Agent

http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...501#post1952501

shit nice, am feelin that, flow was good all the way through and good vocab used.

drop this link in the NOK tryout thread

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i was really feelin dis one cuz...mainly becuz i go through it once in a while...8/10...and yeah, drop dis in tha NOK tryout thread...u should make it...i'll tell J-Dot to PM u...4real

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he's posed to already be wit NOK...he dropped a tryout, and i put him on tha roster...i think thats him, if not, check that NOk shit out