New version is uploaded now..
Has a third verse added and some other new stuff..

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Beat...good...i...like...very...much...no more playin lol...this was a decent joint to be honest i dunno what DJ is on about coz i really feel the Aus accent on a track but that's prolly coz our accents in pronounciation terms are similar but it's something i feel doesn't affect your songs at all.

Lyrics and flow were something that really caught my ears they were real dope some of the best from ya i liked the adlibs too they were well placed and sorry but you sound like Pac...shame i got that started coz everyone agrees especially the last bit..."Them is my last words" sounded real similar...but overall very good joint...downloaded it too so this def is good to me...keep em comin you and a few other people here are seriously the only reason i'm still here so keep doin ya thing...props dawg.

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Lol.. ^The "Them is my last words" sample is actually taken from a pac song.. I didnt record that..

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you had really good quality, nice lyrics as you usually do, i like ur voice, but on this track it seemed like u were just yellin on the mic..... show emotion but dont yell..... the reverbs is alil much as some sed, but im cool with it..... decent track i think, but not up to some other shit u made because of the yellin u seem to do on the mic...... i noticed the pac voice along time ago, and i dont think u needa shake it, its just the way u sound..... overall nice track, but u personally can do better.. i have a link in my sig to return the favor wen u have time....

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Yeah the shouting is more or less because I got a bad mic that isnt very sensitive.. Its annoying, but what can ya do..

Uppin..

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you've outgrown your quality... go buy something ... cool choice of beat, you come on solid (couple pops tho)... the song is pretty cool, energetic as hell, catchy bridge/hook - your flows not as complex as some of the songs I've heard from you, so thats the only downpoint, but you got a great grasp of what your doing, I like this song, it has a real tupac vibe to it man, sounds like he's a big influence on your style... keep droppin em.. peep "My Haoutz" and drop some feed...1

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Yeah I agree about the mic situation.. But I'm broke as a joke right now.. I'm getting paid tonight so I need to work out my money and I'll start putting a bit away for a new mic each week..

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we got an aussie tupac lol.. beat is always good

your flow was on point i didnt notice any fall offs

i liked the track man im sure the audience will be moving there head to this track

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Lol.. I'm sort of trying to shake the tupac voice a bit.. Dont know how people would take it.. Its hard though because thats kind of my style at the moment.. -_-

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you kinda sound like tupac man, but with a very mild accent....

i love the beat too

but something is wrong with the vocals, they sound hollow man... especially on the chorus
im really feelin the beat... makes you nod ya head you know
lol at the backround noise when you say "imma fuck ya girl" hahaha thats pimp

good job man... keep the good shit up

dope c-walk line too... good shit

return the favor man
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178535

Hollow in what way? Its probably the microphone, once I start hitting up the studios my quality will soar because the mic I'm using at the moment aint really all that..

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i thought this was good i like some of your stuff man but honestly from u.s. it is an adjustment for the accent but ive adjusted .....also im gettin a little tired of people with some of there assesments about you lack emotion or you sound echoey or any of that people on this website need to come to the realization we arent in studios we have cool edit and a shit mic deal with it we de all sound like stars in a studio i mean when i listen to fifty i dont say hmmmm he lacks emotion i say i like it or i dont all in all good track im out of breathe now lmao holla back at the sick of this track homie 11111111111

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this was a nice track u were on point ur flow was nice fell off a lil bit at times, the beat was cool 2 listen 2, vocab was there, & u did ur thang on it overall quality is 9.0/10

Ahem...... i dont give out feedback for no reason!!

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