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03-01-05, 02:31 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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Feel Tha Pain.......
IP: E9FB AC6F
An other Rare Open Mic.....man deepness here . . . All of my past memories eatin away Make me feel like i can stand no vertebres Like Nelly'd say i'm "hurr too stay" THIS AINT No hobby i cant play I need to do this to proove kids wrong Be myself and remember to live strong Never give up under any circumstances Actin to me like the toxins that hurt the planet Then growing up without a father was hard Left my soul deeply emotionally scared Knowing growin up without a father figure Seems like lifes just an other bumper sticker Learnin some people you love reall r ur enimies I'm a youngin i still have a unclear lens to see The Worlds not gonna win this time around Cuz my hearts gonna be pure as a weddin gown
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03-01-05, 09:41 AM
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unknown legend...
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IP: 928B 1485
yo I'll be the first to judge since no one else is lol...
frankly, I think this was not very interesting...I think u need to elevate next time using vocabulary,or metas or something that gives insight into it...it was pretty basic... im thinking u dont do open mics alot by ur beginning comment...anyway...that's my peice... NOK u know how we do...
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