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Old 03-02-05, 07:00 PM   #1
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Why 16 (Remix)

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I been sittin down thinin alot.and ders alotta messed up things in this world.....


Why is that niggas always take ur your ish
why dey got to get jealous and run ur shit
Why ya try to be da hard type wen ya soft
And wen it comes to da end all u had is lost
Why we gotta be stupid as hell
And sorround ourselves wit dudes who glorify jail
Why do ya gurls always want who cant have
And wen we tell da truth ya go and get mad

Why ya niggas think skool is wack
Turn around on da block and push dat crakk
By doin dis ya jus helpin da man
But da man dont give a fuck cuz he squashing our plans
Wat u think dat we black and its poppin
Everyday constantly seein injustices happenin
Tell me why dey build less skools and more prisons
Cuz dey want to incarserate us and stop from livin

Why these Hassids is our takin town
But dont nobody do nuttin but put on a frown
Lemme even try and build a community
Peeps will cry segragation but they give them immunity
Why is dat our skool is broke, dis aint joke
They messin wit our future and our minds gettin choked

Why we gettin killed but da jakes dont care
But when its a upperclass murder they check every hair
Why da U.S. always tryin to help others
But when it comes to us.....
They treat us like rats in the gutter
Why our country stay bombarding lesser nations
But when it reaches our soil, we cry terrorism
Why can a Cuban refugee become a citizen
But whena Haitian trys they deny him da privelege

Why is dat I cant drive on my own
But da kidd is old enough to stand trial all alone
Why ya people try to play me out
Tell me dat im 15 so shut my mouth
But im done dealin wit these chumps
So ima turn my speakers up and let da music bump
Facts im headed on a different path
All the things ive done is a thing of the past
Im about to blast back fo real
Beacuase from now on word on my life im keepin it real

Why............Life Goes On

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Old 03-02-05, 07:21 PM   #2
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ehh to be honest man...this wasnt very good...no multies at all....your vocab was lacking tremendously....0 wordplay....the "why" thing is pretty played out...and was played out a couple months ago....all you have to do is elevate...go read some tutorials...just elevate yourself and you will be aright....i rate this 2/10...
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Old 03-02-05, 07:47 PM   #3
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thanks fo da feedback.....ima up it up on da next one
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Old 03-03-05, 04:37 PM   #4
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Ayo check my remix of why
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Old 03-08-05, 06:14 PM   #5
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yea dis wasn't all dat...to basic for me, didn't even catch my attention like dat...i give it like a 3.5/10...dont take dat offensively...no hate
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