this is some dumb shit I threw together when I wasn't busy beefin or collabin wit OneStep...though he's on this song....

Hook:

Blah Blah,
Blah Blah Blah,
Blah Blah Blah,
Blah Blah

LFS The Great

I roll wit crazy, deranged orangutans,
Who jump outta jet planes thru big ass flames.
Oh s*** what am I saying, just playin,
They do backflips wit Bobby Flay and wit no delay I jump in the fray each and every day and I just have to say that,
Huh what wait what am I thinking?
Sorry I just got hit wit a baseball bat, you didn’t hear the crack?
Umm crack that’s reminds me of something,
This one time I was wit Whitney but I thought she was bluffin,
Til she started huffin the crack, needles papers and carpet,
Meanwhile the monkeys was cookin my parka,
And I couldn’t figure out just who was barkin,
Til I looked out the window and saw Mrs. Mary Muffet wit sum curds and whey,
And the spider had some weed and a crème brulay,
So welcome to my shindig on 123 Park Way,
And you’re invited to the next one what do ya say?

~~~Hook x 2~~~

One Step Beyond

Blah blah I'm scopin ya home, hopin to bone,
Your sister I'll come get her, and open her throat,
Approachin a checkpoint, then I'm throwin the coke,
"PULL OVER MOTHER FUCKER!" Shit I hope it’s a joke,
He noticed some chrome gleamin when I open my coat,
Then he said "drop the gun or I’ll open your yoke!
Don't be concealin shit that you're not hopin to boast!"
Noticed some glass on the pavement, to open his throat,
Picked it up, slit him up, and rolled with his toast,
Ran 2 or 3 blocks, with blood soaked in my clothes,
I murdered a man, goin to hell but now im focused to go,
Police is rollin down the block and I noticed my home,
Next morning TV said a cop died, was poked in his throat,
And stated with his dying breathe he said "Yo it’s a joke"

~~~Hook x 1~~~

LFS The Great

Blah blah blah oh wait the hook has stopped,
Sorry I was spittin fire so I had better stop, and drop,
But not roll I’d rather rock,
But anyway I was standin on the block,
Chillin wit beatin up O.S.B. with a dirty sock,
Til he took out a flock of seagulls and a bunny,
And I thought “Ok now it’s time to get serious sonny”
So I whipped out a Bag of Chips and a grade,
And wit a puff of smoke transformed into LFS the Great,
I picked up the birds and flung ‘em like darts into a tree,
Then the rabbit tried to jump away but it couldn’t flee,
Cuz I picked it up and gave it to The Pope,
And he blessed it and dressed it in a hoodie and a Mink,
They lived happily ever after I think...

~~~Hook~~~

Linkto my feedback is HERE!

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LOL! this was a funny piece.. the whole first verse was just comedy and thats my kind of style i like pieces like that so definately dope.. OSB your multies and wordplay are just sick.. ya whole verse rhymed which made this piece even better

overall : 8.5/10

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¿Guess Who?

thanks man I was just havin fun wit this song...I think that's what rap is missin now but that's my opinion...lol...re-uppin...is that a word?

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just to let you know... blah blah is how i greet the ladies...
so you better leave feedback bitch or i'll eat your babies...

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wow pretty good seriously,nice collab,lol funny,you two dope werd,structure is perfect,flow is too,vobac is dope.good drop

LMFAO this piece was hilarious your opener was funny as hell. Congrats on this piece lmao.

yall some silly cats this reminded of somethin' eminem would do and he on top ri now so i guess thats a plus yea but this was funny i liked the orangutang line. ~respect

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Nigga Im Nasty My Style Is Sound Porn !

wait... why has this not been upped in forever? uppin

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