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Old 03-03-05, 01:59 PM   #1
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How We Do Remix(No Disses)

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I Put Automatic Semi's On The Side Of Both Doors
Them Thick Shells Will Leave Ya Whole Top Blown
In One Shot Man, Yo Ass So Gone
Rap Verse Got Nigkas Who Got Beef With Me An Ore-O
You Lucky,We Easy,We Tipsy, It's Easy
We Un-touch-able Like, Elliot Nes-ses Giiiiirl
You Now Rolling With Cin-Ca-Na-Tus
Watch With A Silver Cross, God Left My Skill Blessed(Ahhh)
Simply Uhhh
Empty Uhh
Fucka RV I'm Still Rapping In The Slum
Auto-Malice Uhh
Rapping One-On-One
I'll Clap At Ya Bitch Ass, Frunt And We'll Stunt
Hommie It's Fame Time
Ya 60 Seconds Up
Call J Dot, And We'll Teach You How To Stunt
It Took Me Once
But I Got My Ish Uhp
Rolling With Estab, Now Nigkas like Whaaa??
Go And Try To Frunt
I'll Leave Ya Body Dumped
Thinking I Wont Stunt
Smash Ya Body In A Trunk
Nigkas Said Whaa?
Chevy With A Pump
Got To Stick Together
To Get Much Better
Remixing Leather
We Beef Forever
Destruct Like Weather
Don't Cont-iplate Wether
We Challenge
In Battles We Do Dammage
We Average
More Wins Then Any Nigka Who Steped In This, (Established)


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Old 03-03-05, 02:07 PM   #2
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Alright Upping This
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Old 03-03-05, 03:06 PM   #3
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liked this piece man good structure , nice flow
kept me readin it shit yo ya get tha chance check out
some of my open mics feed back is appreciated peace.............CB83
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Old 03-03-05, 03:07 PM   #4
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Alright Leave Me Your Links I'll Check Em' Out
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Old 03-03-05, 03:16 PM   #5
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how many whack ass "how we do" remix can ya lil mind think off ya ruining the song thing of a hook by ya self if ya can rap just a lil bit ya can think off a hook and not feed of other rappers hooks god damn ya whack
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Old 03-03-05, 03:20 PM   #6
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It Aint Even Off The Hook You Dumb Ass, Try And Fucking Listen To The Sedcond Verse You Bitch Ass, You Know What XCell Fuck You Kid, You So Fucking Whack I Merked You Already Go Look Through Your Battle Stats You Prick
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Old 03-03-05, 03:40 PM   #7
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i aint never battled u and"how WE do" we is plural and aint no bady ridin with u ya cant see that no one likes ya bitch ass
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Old 03-03-05, 03:40 PM   #8
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and ya said ya self we average dissin himself
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Old 03-03-05, 03:42 PM   #9
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Stupid Ass, Lol Listen To The Song And Rap Along With This The Line Does Not Finish At We Average It Moves To The Next Line It's Just A Pause Dumby
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Quote:
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learn how to spell DUMMY
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Old 03-03-05, 07:47 PM   #11
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Least he's humble X Cell. I respect kids who say what they are more than I do kids who act tough when they have an Eminem quote in their sig. You talk about being original? Just shut the fuck up man.

Aight to the song. I like this one better than the other one. I am not a big Game fan and I just listened to half of his song and turned it off. Hurt my ears. Try making the lines run together on one line, because the pauses are annoying as crap. Overall, better than the other, but I still am not a Game fan, of his lyrics or beats.
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Old 03-03-05, 07:48 PM   #12
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Old 03-03-05, 07:56 PM   #13
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shit flowed real well...i was feelin this drop. i think you couldve came a lil more creative, but i understand you had to go w/ tha beat. i think you should work on rhyming. other than that, this shit was hot.....8/10
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Good Look Man Ha Ha You Saw Your Name Up In Here?
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