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| illemental |
  
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1 | 16.67% |
| Young Blaze |
  
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5 | 83.33% |
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03-04-05, 12:14 PM
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the real man of steel
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illemental vs Young Blaze
IP: 58E6 C588
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03-04-05, 12:19 PM
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IP: A5C3 7E57
illemental has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-05 12:19 PM.
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03-04-05, 12:23 PM
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IP: 58E6 C588
Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-05 12:23 PM.
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03-04-05, 12:32 PM
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IP: A5C3 7E57
ok kid 30 minuts time to get off ur moms nipples and drop ya lines
*begins* i admire the fact that this herb has walked to the plate/ he aint even full developed aint prepared for his fate/ should slid a scale for u accepted so u coulda discovered my weight/ im full grown and control the thrown and old vet back to retake the zone/ so now after 12 posts u finally got hit/ ran in to the wrong kid the one that dont ever miss/ leave ya skull split incase we in ned of pikin ya brain/ feelin the pain and my old name was insane/ but that was before the return now young blaze is feelin a burn/ this aint even heat static friction but still a hard lesson to learn/ textual burn kid a win is somethin ya earn/ so i dropped it plain an simple/ try again later this can stay confidential/ |
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03-04-05, 12:50 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 58E6 C588
When I diss this fag I up the viewers 'Interest Rate' like 2nd mortgage loans....
why should you evan show?....there's 'no use' like an anorexics toilet bowl.... im an 'unstopable force' rv will witness `death and morn vets'... battling me....this 'dick just fucked himself' like budget cuts on porn sets.... i 'slice threw yah head` till the skin 'puffy' more~then~combs... I key more 'unwanted letters' than outgoing mail at orphin homes.... its not a 'snack' with the 'salad this kid tosses'... lyrical?....I thought you were horrible in billiards with the way you 'rack up loses'.... subliminal blows continue to flow and leave you riddled with holes.... your manhood is shakier than Michael J Fox's pistol control.... ....end..... Don’t "Mess With Me" or I’ll get "Under your skin" like "Tight Stitches"/ You "Fight Bitches" cause your "Skills" goes "Up And Down" more then "Light-Switches"/.....
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03-04-05, 01:00 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 58E6 C588
uppppiinnnn....................................... .
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03-05-05, 11:11 AM
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IP: D890 FA2C
uppin lol wow my text game is terrible its been like 6-7 months since i texted so i dunno lol my old account was soul sickness its still active u can look it up if u want but i abbandoned it..
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03-05-05, 12:28 PM
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Yeah,This Account = Alias
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: illemental
ima give it ta illmental since he had clearly way betta structure..so i under stood his concept ofhis verse...Punches came weak in da battle....young blaze ya verse was mad stretch..WTF?....vocab coulda been better...flow was on point a lil....wordplay was nicely played...close battle but i give it ta illemental v/Illmental |
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03-05-05, 01:17 PM
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been dope.
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IP: 5895 95C3
Voted For: Young Blaze
choose winners verse: When I diss this fag I up the viewers 'Interest Rate' like 2nd mortgage loans.... why should you evan show?....there's 'no use' like an anorexics toilet bowl.... decent opener, should of came with a personal. im an 'unstopable force' rv will witness `death and morn vets'... battling me....this 'dick just fucked himself' like budget cuts on porn sets.... nice punch, pretty funny. i 'slice threw yah head` till the skin 'puffy' more~then~combs... I key more 'unwanted letters' than outgoing mail at orphin homes.... aight punch, heard it before. its not a 'snack' with the 'salad this kid tosses'... lyrical?....I thought you were horrible in billiards with the way you 'rack up loses'.... nothin to special bout this punch, didnt flow that good. subliminal blows continue to flow and leave you riddled with holes.... your manhood is shakier than Michael J Fox's pistol control.... basic punch. Don’t "Mess With Me" or I’ll get "Under your skin" like "Tight Stitches"/ You "Fight Bitches" cause your "Skills" goes "Up And Down" more then "Light-Switches"/..... nice closer, good flow. vote:young blaze http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179287 return the favor^^^ |
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03-05-05, 06:03 PM
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IP: D890 FA2C
ok thanks for the votes people uppin...dont forget to leave some links for us to return...
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03-06-05, 02:47 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 58E6 C588
upppinnnnn........................................
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03-06-05, 03:58 PM
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Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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IP: B525 44D9
Voted For: Young Blaze
young blaze tok it cuz he had alot of punches, illemental didnt have no punches. neither had personals, but i guess it would b kinda hard 2 know anythang bout eachutha scence ur both new. both had good flow, good structure. RETURN THA FAVOR http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=179864 thanx, holla atcha boy, werd
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03-06-05, 04:00 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 202E 0183
Voted For: Young Blaze
yb took this with structure and punches...ill ur rhymes were elementry and werent really hitting that hard....yb had good metas......peace plz return favor |
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03-06-05, 04:04 PM
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Non-Convicted Rapist
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IP: 1C00 CCA1
Voted For: Young Blaze
Young Blaze - you fuckin merked him...no hate illemental...blaze u had good flow, nice multies, dope punches, nice personals, good vocab and really nice metas...the last 4 lines killed it...liked the michael j. fox thing illemental - i really couldn't flow with ur shit, not very good structure, ur rhymes were very basic which isn't always bad, but was in this case...ok vocab and ur punches didn't really hit that hard
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03-06-05, 05:49 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: Young Blaze
uh, heres what i see illmental.....basically your not getting my vote because of your flow and structure....boy, it was pretty crazy in that verse, stretched lines, forced rhymes, gotta even that out man, it took alot away from your punches that you were throwing.....plus, your wordplay and vocab needs to be upped, if you have good vocab and wordplay, your punches will come across alot nicer/stronger..... young blaze, not bad you had some structure problems too, i think, just at the start, then you got into a nice rhythm, okay, i think you had the harder punchces/personals, not really anthing that totally jumped out at me....you didnt stretch many of your lines, you stayed consistent with dissin throught out your verse, which is good, overall, thought you took this pretty easy, still need some elevating, but yeah v/young blaze
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