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Old 03-07-05, 07:40 PM   #1
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Question Stumle,Tumble, And Try Again

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verse 1:
rememberin' back when i was a little boy
back when i used ta live in the state illonois
there was so many things i'd enjoy
back before i bent rappers like alumnium alloy
i use ta have it good before i knew it, it all changed
my ma didnt have enough change, moved outta range
was to small of an age ta understand all this rage
thats when we moved ta the city of Milwaulkee
it didn't take long ta see this was my destiny
a rappa i was blessed ta be leave others wit jealousy
but my ma always abused me and did hennessey
people sellin' half a key thats the path i'd keep
shit got steep.....so deep, rememberin n' losin sleep
so as you peep remember me as you read the hook u c

hook:
from day one i had trouble
beats i used ta humble
lyrics i used ta mumble
keep on goin' til i stumble
read the rest til u tumble

verse 2:
always used ta be quiet when little
I never got anything life always a riddle
hyped up on sugar acting like a lunatic
but if i had a goal i never woulda quit
did some rite did some wrong and shit
but every time my mother threw a fit
always at my boo's when kicked out
always was one ta leave sicked out
my ma always bein' tricked out
then we moved again after i was 10
moved to a small hick town that i hate
completely out my way, outta state
have no worries and havin no hurries


hook:
from day one i had trouble
beats i used ta humble
lyrics i used ta mumble
keep on goin' til i stumble
read the rest til u tumble

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Old 03-07-05, 08:55 PM   #2
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yo man this was straight... better than the other stuff I've read from you...

7.2/10

Keep on keepin' on...

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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 03-07-05, 09:13 PM   #3
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yo thanx homie let's keep the feedback goin..
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Old 03-07-05, 09:25 PM   #4
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chea... check the new open mic... "You Don't Know Me"
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 03-07-05, 09:27 PM   #5
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cute...........
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Old 03-07-05, 09:38 PM   #6
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what the hell r u smokin kid....
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