new to the site but veteran status please believe.....


capable of pullin the trigger without a consious attack
makin that female get an abortion two times back to back..
sympathy is a lack my remorese is an irelevant factor...
the final moment when dealth is guaranteed is what i capture..
to implent a fear that no man can conquer...
a monster that no imagination can ponder...
r you capable of being that one stand out...
while others say they have skills wit they hand out...
mr ragin bull dinero stlye dominance on the screen play...
that one dude that can turn recess into d- day...
glances to glares your reflection non existant....
a loss is iminent but a soilder is still persistent...
non existant your soilders have been eliminated...
moral has shiffted your pupils are diahlated....
before you know it your existance anhilated...
what you thought made you capable of winning dissapears
you have just been obliterated....


AKA TAKING A LOSS IN A FREESTYLE BATTLE LOL...HAH HA..LOL

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gud volcab,, gud overall flow

moral has shiffted your pupils are diahlated....
before you know it your existance anhilated..

like dat part.............keep it up .......last 2 lines need slight improvement

overall..........gud stuff

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