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Old 03-27-05, 07:36 PM   #1
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k i dont even know were ta start off,............
this bitch tore my heart out
an now its like im constantly lost,..............
how can a father be proud honestly.........
when hes easily set off,
i'll never do wat i did back then..........

mostly cuz i never cared bout anything
not even tha loss of a friend,.........
yell scream shout my heart never stops bleedin
ive been still tryin to figure it out,...........
i thank god that im still breathin sometimes,..........
considering tha shit that comes out my mouth
There was some good times we shared
but i still cant figure em' out,..............
your the lyrics to my rhymes,.........
kinda like tha trigger for a gun
but only one of them shine's,..............
when my middle finger continues to linger
then there's nothin more on my mind,.........

i spit out utterin threats
that leaves you sufferin
whos next,
you muthafukas think im playin
i spend ja ruels lowsy pay checks
i smoke tha mowie wowie
an break out in cold sweets
thought you knew wat i was about
guess you aint payin attention yet
was there some things i should have did,
i guess me not payin enough attention to you,
made you hate me all over agian
i cant believe we use to date,
when it was a complete waste
fuck we were better off as friends
i write about my life in songs an letter's
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Old 03-27-05, 10:31 PM   #2
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