...Shattered red translucent glass drapes below & among memories
Induced fury flows thru the punctured veins in thy visegriped hands
Same hands that glided among her complextion before our binding kiss
Same hands that signed the end of it, Thus Ratifying our flagrent love
Procrastination of true friendship, full circle stopped but a heartbeat passes its radius...

Reminescence of branded memories render me hopeless
Pulsating temple as smoke asphyxciates & numbs my being
Birds eye view among perspectives yet setting myself aside
My blood boils yet i shake like a cold shiver...Why?!?!
She put a horrid taste in my mouth as if i regurgitated in my throat
And now a heartbeat pieced back together beats on normally but the past dregs of sorrow that clouded my being
Whiter away yet leave footprints on the same soul she stepped on.
My mind sobers & thoughts take form with wings & fly away fading
As a stork lands upon my mind with a birth of a new perspective
My blackened tears now turn into tears of happiness, a new beginning
As I pull off the ring that bound us together & sever the chains of my bruised character....

...Rubbing the sand of my eyes, the dawn of a new me begins
As I pick up the translucent glass with no remorse or sorrow
I still feel the sense of breaking out but in my own self indulged motivation slide it to the back of my mind
For my memories progress & thats what they shall remain .. Memories
As I shut the lid on the picture box .. let go it & yawn a sense of relief
Give amnesty to depression & thus decide to Live Now ... Die Later...

Featured for a week, dope piece,stickied for all to see,keep it up~Fluid

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i fancy'd this one alot nice vocab...overall a very nice drop i'm impressed

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i liked dis a lot, good shit

I liked this alot man, Yo, you from San Jo or what? (LoL) that's what's up! Yo, hit me up and we can work on somethin' 2gether!
Def. not newbe.
sweft

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Yea Im From San Jose .. Whats Good?

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That's what's up! Where you stay the south side? I used to just be downtown. Well, for like 3 months I lived In Sunnyvale. But mostly like, Jackson and Fifth st. Like, tha apartments off the rail-road tracks. Yo, you know a cat they call PDIDDY?
Sweft

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was pretty good was hard to follow at parts but i like stuff like that vocab is good shit is kinda strectched dont think it could be a good spoken word piece but still liked it pretty nice visuals good vocab as i said nice wordplay here and there i like how you stayed on topic but had no topic at all it was a pretty good drop nothing much bad i can say about it nice work

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