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...fuck life.
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time is of the essence
IP: 28AD 5545
what . . . 365 squares, that repetitively repeat again and again "12" categories that show the class that each set belongs in however during a special account, one -leaps- into the cycle but the next round about, it dissapears as if put to denial how . . . *x* marks the spot, as it slowly creeps closer but the numbers still ascending in chronilogical order representing the past, present, and future tense the intersecting lines reminding me of that special event what . . . A face and set of hands, that tell everyones destiny whether to give birth, or simply to rest n' peace once again, "12" catgories that have different meanings inside, each contains 5 sub-forms, to handle the little things how . . . *Noon* is the tense in which the ringing will occur staring at the hands, as they too, begin movign faster AS if too read my mind, the face's heart also starts to beat Now arriving is the ring, so i gradually leave my seat in conclusion . . . time is of the essence, and is the key to life but can be very dangerous, and cause painful strife It can be thwe cause of nervousness or death It can also be the cause of one's very first breath. |
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IP: 3240 794D
wow, this poem is dope in so many ways, nice use of metaphors here,i liked how creative you were with your description of "time" and how you chose to portray that in your set up..great job..1
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Sam Dope
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IP: D6BE 87D8
^^ Weerd...what she said...lol...Good shit man...Again, nice emotion, and a good metaphoric shit...I dunno what I'm talkin about cuz I usually don't rate poems, but this gets a 10/10...good shit...1
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