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Old 04-14-05, 08:02 PM   #1
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"If You" - First track off the mixtape!

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Yup. First track off the mixtape, first track with the new software, new mic (MXL990 ), new amp, new everything. Finally get to do what I need to on a track and damn it feels and sounds fuckin great!! First track on http://doom.dmusic.com



You should know the routine with me and links by now, but here are some anywho:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184404
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186230
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186236
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186362
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Old 04-14-05, 08:29 PM   #2
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dooms! damn dawg shit was ill...i liked that lady lol i got kinda a 50's /60's feel from that...lyrics were dope flow was on as always was rele feelin it man lmao at tha canibus fan that was my fav line...overall def worth tha download keepin droppin fam =1=...
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Old 04-14-05, 08:44 PM   #3
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jea i like this track, lyrics were above average for me
loved the beat your flow was good for the most part.....

keep it up and tell me what kind of pre amp you got....
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Old 04-15-05, 01:32 AM   #4
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Listening...trippy fuckin intro...

Damn...DAMN!!! Whatta fuckin flow...great voice, great beat...very nice track...this is some awesome shit right here....Very hott track...we should collab sometime...

Return the favor..."No We Won'"...
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Old 04-15-05, 11:30 AM   #5
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Decree: thanks man. lol glad you liked that Canibus line, lol.

De Leon: thanks mayne. I hit you via PM's for that pre-amp info.

L.E.: that's fam. I'll hit that link.


Wow, 28 views, 3 responses. Anyone else of you 28 got something to say? lol.
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Old 04-15-05, 09:06 PM   #6
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peepin... nice beat - has a good feel to it. You got some NICE quality yo. Good looks. Holla at me with your eq tips lol. Flow is polished as hell on here, I'm feelin how you ride this beat yo. Lyrics - nice... Feelin this all-around. stand out line in my mind: "Have a seat if you think you standin a chance/ my battle stance'd make Cannibus crap in his pants/"

I just realized who you sound like. Cunninglynguists. Yup. Holla at me for colab, ya style is nice man. Good luck with ya mixtape. 1
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Old 04-15-05, 09:24 PM   #7
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Intro kind of weird...Beat is straight...Flow is coo...Delivery is ok...sound boring...Not really feeling the voice...straight drop...not really my steez...

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Old 04-15-05, 10:02 PM   #8
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Sick Ill Cell: okay, cool. Thanks for the feed

Phen: Thanks on the qual man. It still has some room for improvement too . I'll PM you about those EQing tips, but you'll be surprised how little was done. Cunnninglynguists is def a new one, lol. I haven't heard the same "you sound like..." twice, lol.

To the tizzop with this trizzack!
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Old 04-15-05, 10:13 PM   #9
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I liked the beat....it was a beat geared toward a vocalist with a vocie dat can carry a beat an ya voice is strong enough to carry it...lyrically u came hard....nice word play...that closer was a monster....you flowed nice throughout...ya delivery was a lil on the baln side tho but that was really only negative....your quality has greatly improved....some of ya dubs seemed a lil off...the sample on the hook fit wit lyrics nicely...u wrote to this beat perfectly....I think u coulda used some more addlibs tho....but not a biggie...overall track is good as is but could use some touching up...so I give it a 8/10
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Old 04-16-05, 12:26 AM   #10
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Okay okay, let's leave some feed...

Quality is great, I love the beat, no doubt about that...good looking on that one.

Flow was impeccable, you really took this beat and made it yours, I was feeling the flow all the way through the whole song.

I also like the lady because it's a nice add-on and gives the song something special, something mysterious even. I like the lyrics and use of vocabulary, had some dope lines in there, for instance the Cannibus-line like others mentioned before me.

Will definitely look good on that mixtape (g'luck with that btw) because the beat gets into your head and it's just a real nice track to listen to.

Dope song, please rtf (last link in my sig)...

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damn i liked this alot man good soundin beat and the flow was ya best yet for me definately a hott mixtape track and ya quality is alot better ....holla
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Old 04-17-05, 01:33 AM   #13
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Flow was nice..lyrics nice...this song made me laugh the canibus fan line was funny as hell ock,dleviery was also nice
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Old 04-17-05, 11:30 AM   #14
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DQ, thanks a lot. Def appreciate it. Man, everyone noticed that Canibus line huh? Hmm..Mixtape should be out the end of May and I think this track fits in real nice with the others. All of them have original production and all of em stuck in my head, so I'm confident they'll stick in yours too . Thanks again for the feedback, I'll hit the link in your sig and rtf.

Delf, good looks mayne.

Trem, thanks man. This is the new wave of quality and presence I'm brining to my tracks now that I got the hardware and software to do what I need. I'll leack some more tracks when the mixtape is done.
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Old 04-17-05, 12:32 PM   #15
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lstn; beat is nice vocals are decent flow and emotionally you bought it good on this joint nicely done dooms
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