trying to get best poet of april, lol, tried sumthin different here



runnning, clucking, having babies, and yelling aloud
when i am suddenly captured by a threatening croud
im grabbed by my skins coverings, and stuck in a cage
now, my mind filled with craze, as i unleash a wrath of rage

biting at the steel bars that held me from my freedom
place in the back of a truck, so my enemies, i couldnt see em
looking around only to see others in the same position as me
a wind of gloom spread through the room, for no one was happy

im thrown into the side of my cage, i suppose from the brakes
the back door is opened and thats when i see his face
a fat short brown headed and dirty shaven smiling male
when i was lifted out of the truck is when i realized im going to hell

for right in front of me was a sign "BOB AND CHARLIES CHICKEN FACTORY"
only one thign was in my mind at the time "this is the last of me"
as the first to discover what happens, nervousness rushes through my talons
set oon a table and immediately fell due to a loss of balance

my eyes cross, as the boss, said" they'll make nice chicken mcnuggets"
that is when the intern grabbed the cleaver and violently swung it
each millisecond the sharp blade coming closer just to end my life..........
.........."i want a 10 piece and make sure that theres extra fries"...........

This was pretty good...not your best, but still decent...Liked it alot...If you keep droppin like this, poet of april will be yours man...weerd...pz

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this was kinda cool, the way you did a different perspective, i thought some areas you could have used better vocab, but i enjoyed reading this, i kinda wanted to laugh, haha, chickens......keep up man

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