fed n shred up over the past year i been given
its like im hangin on by a thread of thin linen
dead in the flesh cuz God whos risen kept me livin
hearing my death rites twice wasnt even ruff enough
i see scars that remind how bad i was fucken up
pop my collar brushed me off told me to tuffen up
puffin sutff is easy consequences raw n gruesome
oding was hard but a car crash made the twosome
broken hearts and jaws that cant even chew gum
was i blind to forget the place i just came from
backhand Gods face was the ace i played that night
karmas real it took back what i prayed for in life
gave it to a kid wit the name my momma gave me
its a joke remindin how i dug my own grave g
sit in my own prison over time a cell that i made me
found a diamond in the rough tossed it back i must be crazy
musta been hazy on a trip to piss my life down the drain
carry this ball and chain walk the isle marry a life of pain
took its hand and put the big fukken rock on top it
givin satan my life was a mistake but i stopped it
thru forgiveness is freedom jah's words ill qoute it
promote it a preacher note it write it down who wrote it
to be forgiven you forgive then forgive yourself
do i ask forgiveness for a life threw on the shelf
you find gold like i had save it take it to ya graves lid
dont ever think twice or take it for granted
learn from mistakes God spoke the seeds been planted
give thanks that i aint some ashes on a mantle
he helps me live right show me what a man do
got my back always willin to give me chance dude
rocks rhymes thru me so u cud hear food for the spirit
right here close as the clutch when u need to gear shift
i aint flowin now Gods spitten verses in my ear kid
if u tearin n u need him hell appear quick
if u tired or sick got fired or its your chick
you gangsta god is sick need somethin hard hell b a brick
got the saint hes the nick u got the mouse hell be a click
got cards hell be a trick need a minute hell b the tic before the toc
never to waiver never to stop hes your shepherd n leads your flock
got a mental block he turns into draino and fixes the clog
on your corner on your block when its cold n when its hot
the spark jumpstartin ya hearts cylinder block
a atom bomb when u need a drop the hip when its time to hop
he knocks u listen he wants to be ya vision
so take what hes sayin thru me let it sink in jus listen
understand clearly to what hes insisting
wants to be close and not so distant
to be your sidekick and the assistant
to be your life and all your existence
for u to obey and not b resistant
to have good and not evil thinking
put down the dope give up the drinkin
grab his hand when your down n sinking
more than anything to b ya friend n watch u glisten
cant u tell he wants the best for you
wants u to rock spots attest that his word is true
the life you knew he drew before u broke thru
u too can be one of the chosen few
my debut yeah buildin my crew here
knew i cud make it thru jus waitin for my cue yeah
till i blew up you viewed me as a crack addict screw up
you few who believed and knew i thank you
you few who deceived and knew mutha mutha fukk you

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Weedex
Terror 2005
Wreckk

KINGDIPSET-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
WRECKK
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

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somebody post on this shyt u knoww

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Battle stats 3-0
KO'S
Weedex
Terror 2005
Wreckk

KINGDIPSET-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
WRECKK
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

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Not bad, some good emotion in this peice. But with so many bars like that you need a hook man it woulda made this alot more entertaining and easy to read.

Can ya RTF on my open mic or battle plz