Girl, Lemme see you shake ya ass like a goose
Do like T.I. say, and lemme see ya get loose
Play ya cards right, and you can open the knose
Cuz you the queen of hearts and im a wild duece
Girl, I like it when you give it to me rough
Throwin me down on the bed showin me that ya tough
Then we go at it for hours cuz 10 minutes aint enough
I can tell your "addicted" cus you like the "Vanilla stuff"
Girl, I really like your style
Cuz every once in a while
We hit a " menaja-trois " make it a little mo wild
" Damn Child!"
You hit me spicy hot, cuz you kno i dont like it mild
Now..... Reach to the side and catch the wall
You cant leave yet cuz i put you on call
Tellin me you dont want it cuz we up in the mall
" But soon "..... you on ya knees in a bathroom stall
Thats how we do it and all
We make the scene a little more tence
When i shock you hard just like an electric fence
Say girl, ya head seem only a little dence
So ima cumm in ya face..... give ya head a little rinse

(Hook)
Drop that shit
Work that shit
Hit it old school and
Twerk that shit

Ride That shit
Roll that shit
Do it like Tigger and
Bounce that shit

VERSE TWO COMMIN SOON

Shit was pretty descent. Off structure, couldve been better. But nice for me...6/10

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hmm, need to up ya vocab, get more emotion on
a topic like this, i saw what you were trying to do but you
lacked in a couple key areas like..creativity and syllable
count on ya bars, but its koo,......you'll elevate.....

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

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k i will in a few minutes mann plus i tried to center my text and put bars in my shit but it kept fuckin up on my com but ill send a link

Girls see me they be like that boy a mack and he stay paid,
Niggas scared cause they know I stay wit the Heat like Shaq and D'Wayne Wade,
These niggas on RV soft, a nigga like me stay wit the shotty,
Plus a few punchlines like I'm throwin a party.
These niggas ain't scarin nobody,
I come from a family of criminals, so my little seeds gonna be born wit a rep like they Growing up Gotti...... Easy

I ain't gonna spit anymore until I get a battle. Until then EASY