The Free Will Of Fate
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A Four Letter Word Across A Hobos Sign For Help
A One Night Stand With Your Future Wife Of Thoughts
Inadmissable Evidence To Your Own Trial Of Errors
Cupids Scab Among The Hearts Of Lovers Once Broken Hearts
Inadmissable Evidence To The Faith Of Gods Existence
A Fools Answer To The Inescapable Riddle Of Life
What Is The Pleasure Of Punishment Painful In Reward?
What Is The Exertion Of Free Will In The Past,Present?
Another Of Gods Tools Or A Manifestation Of The Mind
A Concept Bound Thru Obstacles Sculpted By Free Will...

Born From An Untainted Womb Into A Directionless World
Baptised In The Tears Of This Worlds Undoubted Faith
Thru Free Will & Fate He Created His Own Righteous Path
Annoited The Messiah, Mans Savior, His Free Wills Fate
Led Him To His Own Acquiescence Of His Kodak Crucifixion...

Each Translucent Tear I Wipe Away With My Heated Palms
In What I Shield From One Eye The Evils Of Thie World
& Sponge The Selfless Acts That I Myself Indulge In The Other
Thru Repitition These Conflicting Actions I Take Part In
Consume Me & Shape My Free Will, My Bible, A Broken Visage
Looked Upon In A Prophets Eye Thru A Futures Hourglass
Each Scar From Each Grain Of Sand Connected Navigates
My Undoubted Free Will Guides Me Too My Perilous Fate...

Fate Is A Manifestation In A Provoked & Challenged Mind
& Of Those Challenged To Choose Their Own Path Inbetween
Each Path Of Gods Canvas & That To Tune Of A Muses
Reverberated Throughout Ur Soul & That Of Which U In Ur Own Right
Have Been The Muse To Others For Alone On A Beach Their Is Two Sets Of Footsteps
That Of Your Own & Gods .. Ur Own On Your Path & His Beside U To Guid U Towards Ur Own Free Wills Path

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This Was A Very Thought Out Poem I Feel Emotion On This Was Lacking A Lil But Imagery Was Good Vocab Was Excellent Very Good Poem Here Very Thought Provoking Piece This Is More A Eductaed Poem Then A Hertfull One Which Is Good But Not My Type Of Poetry Still Good Drop

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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv

^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit?
herb

This Site Sucks

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fuck man, i had to read this again, it was so deep

shit, just the first paragraph man, had me thinking so much, just so much thought and power put into those words man, really had good meaning....i thought the middle of the verse was okay, but i thought what really stood out, was the italliced verses, wow, did they ever make ya ponder a bit....lol......but seriously, i like reading shit where you have to read it more than once, just because it leaves you thinking about so much more than just whats written, definately keep up man, this was really good

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Thanks For The Feedback ...

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this drop was the truth, yo!!!! finally, someone who drops sum'n real.. prolly one of the best reads i've seen on this site.. keep doing ya thing man.... i know i wanted you in my crew for sum'n and ya just reminded me why....you'll prolly say "thanks for the feed" or sum'n like that... nah, man.... thank YOU!!!!