When I rhyme it's climatic
Cuz my thoughts are sporadic
At times I look like an addict
My words seem like well planned tactics
In this war of verbal magic
What seperates me and you is I can hack it

No one can ammount to my affinity
For this uncanny and eerie ability
To conjur these perfected linguistically
Words that grow in outrageous propensity
While I relay this verbal density
To those who think and act synically

When they believe they can challenge me
They force me to be serious and act callously
Even though when I rhyme I seem to act casually
So others are then consumed by jealousy
Which sooner or later leads to ecstacy
Cuz they soon realize my words are formed eclectically




uppin fa feedbacc

This would sound sick if spat nicely....ill buy these lyics off you...name your price.

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thank u thank u...uppin fa more

very hot shit dawg
vocab was very nice

When I rhyme it's climatic
Cuz my thoughts are sporadic
At times I look like an addict
My words seem like well planned tactics
In this war of verbal magic
What seperates me and you is I can hack it



kinda sounds like Eminem's " Till I Collapse " intro.. butt... its pretty good

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OptimisticallyGenius

fa real? which cd iz dat on cuz i swear i aint heard it...thanx for da complimentz tho




uppin

While I relay this verbal density
To those who think and act synically

When they believe they can challenge me
They force me to be serious and act callously
Even though when I rhyme I seem to act casually
So others are then consumed by jealousy
Which sooner or later leads to ecstacy
Cuz they soon realize my words are formed eclectically

I like that right because it describes the style in which u write and u use for inspiration...Nice vocab and word play

thnx ma...i mean cocoa