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Drama Queen |
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5 | 100.00% |
mizz fyre |
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0 | 0% |
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mizz fyre vs Drama Queen
IP: 07A8 D079
~Official Battle: Best Femcee Award (April)~
Drama Queen vs. mizz fyre Battle Type: Topical KO= 5 votes. Note: 3 votes will be provided by me, Flow, and Deadly (the award mods) if the battle's open past the 15th of May. Topic = Deaf Ears ~Rules~ 30 Lines Max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Bullshit 2 full days to check in, 1 half-day (12 hours) to drop your verse. Both have accepted, therefore no excuses, so check in and drop a nice topical piece! Good Luck both of you, feel free to let your imaginations run freely. ~Lady Fiya Minimum posts to vote: 1000 Check in by: 05-11-05 at 02:55 PM Must drop verse in 720 minutes after check in. |
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IP: 10BC 0CC1
Drama Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 11:25 AM.
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IP: 7109 666C
mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-11-05 02:30 PM.
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 10BC 0CC1
Dear Mr. President, . . . Writing down this letter due to the ravages of your greed Children bleeding on the street, dead bodies on concrete Shattered hopes of a dismantled society and for what? About the atrocious cruelty, I cannot keep my mouth shut Don’t you hear the screams at night, haunting your dreams? You did not free the Iraqi people, just switched regimes . . . Maybe that black, precious oil blinded your eyes from truth Because of your lies, soldiers out there wasted their youth Don’t you hear the millions of prayers by their loved ones? Maybe your ears have been deafened by the sound of guns This war isn’t about justice or freedom, it’s about foolish pride Firmly walking in daddy’s footsteps but despised worldwide . . . Houses turned to ruins, children to corpses, life to death Your hands covered with crimson blood that’s been shed Wiping it off with tons of green papers you earning now Such an obdurate creature, without problem you disavow Just ignoring helpless pleads of an innocent population People like us but were born on an unfortunate location . . . The realization of biggest fears resulting in salty tears Yet our soft shrieks seem to be falling in deaf ears . . . The world
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**the council**
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IP: 7109 666C
One chair in a room darkened, absence of illumination
The place chosen to consume her self made medication Creating a painful sensation, tho easing her greatest fears Erasing tears, secrets she told evidently fell on deaf ears…… At the beginning Sunshine blessed days, she graced lives with a simple smile Loved by many, irrespective that her moods were so versatile Hostile one minute and the next she was acting so contented Reinvented people’s views, so found she was misrepresented Creating a compartment in her mind, containing her feelings Invaded by secrets who could she talk to about her dealings? Turning to her family, but her deepest woes were discarded Her heart barred, like expensive jewels, securely guarded Mental breakdown, so unstable came the doctors prediction Childhood gone, times when candy was her biggest addiction Now facing troubles alone, a spacious world she’s unknown Her life once in flight but its clear that this bird has now flown now........ One bed centered in a room darkened, its there a body lies A note hidden in the corner illustrating her final goodbyes Sunlight from the window presents such a peaceful scene Up in the skies no more deaf ears, finally she’s a queen……..
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E-Style, Bitch.
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This was feedback posted for mizz fyre
IP: 1E02 5605
checkin the pollz, should be a close battle....good drop chick.
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 1AD2 C386
Bumping this battle up, is gonna be close indeed...strong drop...
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**the council**
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IP: 7D94 768B
strong drop from you to dq and thanx T
uppin ya'll
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 0E89 9DF2
...Upping this shizzle to get some fucking votes...
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 31E1 91F6
Voted For: Drama Queen
I think DQ took this one. I was feeling her verse wayy more. I think her verse was a lil more interesting, and understandable, and wayy more creative. I like how you stuck to the topic, and never fell off during yo whole drop. Your vocab was nice, and your imagination was also better in my opinion. Nice drop. Mizz Fyre-you had a nice drop, but I wasn't feelin tha whole thing. No doubt you came out nice, but I think you drifted off topic a lil near the middle to the end. But, you had somewhat good imagination, but I didn't see too much creativitie in yo verse that made me want to think twice about my vote. Your verse was just nice to me. Nothing big! Overall-My vote goes to DQ because she came with more consistency. She came out strong and really hit the topic well, and I felt she stayed that way throught the whole verse. That's why she got my vote. and her imagination was just a lil stronger, and her verse was more intelligent. plz RTF on this battle link http://community.rapverse.com/showb...47&page=3&pp=15 ~1~ |
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 0E89 9DF2
^Thanks for fully explained vote, much appreciated
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Odi et Amo
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IP: C1E7 0953
Uppity Uppity Up Up Up!
Bumping this all the way to the top!
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 5CE5 0C44
Voted For: mizz fyre
I liked the concpet you choose to use for your drop....you had a strong message behind your lyrics, this was a very unexpected route u took on this topic but u worked it nice..which I liked...u had strong vocab...good flow but u lacked any multies, your strucutre was solid though..dats really only weak spot of ya verse. Missfyre......you had a very expected topic...u flipped the title into a story which is what i expected both yall to do...however your story was good..had nice imagery...an it developed well, had a few rough spots but overall story was told nice...ya vocab was good alil inconsistent but for most part strong....your flow was good an had a some good mutlies here & there not many but enough. Overall: both of you had good drops...it was a very close battle..only blaring difference between the two was content...I gave it to drama becuz her content was alot stronger than mizz..other than that it was pretty much even..but great job to both. Vote: DQ Vote switched
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 5CE5 0C44
oops my bad yall i meant to vote for drama queen...y'all could have that changed..my fault
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 93FA 55CE
Uppity Up Up........................................
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