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Old 05-24-05, 06:20 PM   #1
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Why REMIX ft. 20 GraND, Debit and S-large

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Old 05-24-05, 06:44 PM   #2
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this beat i always loved. ya vocals are mad low. better flow than usual but still missing sumthing i think... this second dude i dont like his voice but he is on the hook nycely, wait is that debit? lol this other dude is probaly the best yet, on beat nycely.. u always talk about tha same shyt man, nothing i think is real... debit lol tryin to not sound like banks now lol props on that, u switchin it up a lil bit man, good shyt but u still got some work ahead of u...debit didnt stay on beat as well... in fact there is no real rhyme scheme but i can respect it for what it is... over all this was better than ur recent drops but yall need to get on some new shyt instead of this wanna b gg's tip ya feel me?
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Old 05-24-05, 06:49 PM   #3
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what are you talking about? did u even listen to lyrics? its a why remix, not a Gangsta track retard lol
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Old 05-24-05, 06:57 PM   #4
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im talkin about ur deliveries n ur content fool
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Old 05-24-05, 06:57 PM   #5
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liked Jadakiss' attempt at making a sikk song and some of his questions made you think, but he had a few lines in there that were in complete opposition of the overall mood of the song, hopefully ya'll don't do the same...

20Gz, werd @ repeatin' lyrics and reciting ya phone number, Mike Jones is trash...feelin' that Jay-Z shit and that last line was nyce too...

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dammit FUCK shit ass bitch, I got cut offline while listening and now it won't play, IM me to listen and EDIT this tomorrow plz 20...

P.S. I should stop listening to your tracks cuz you never reply to mine ::bitch slaps you with a harsh black back-hand::
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Old 05-24-05, 07:02 PM   #6
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yea lol word at repeating lyrics.. who duz that?
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Old 05-24-05, 07:17 PM   #7
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yea lol word at repeating lyrics.. who duz that?



lol.....just go ahead and tell him..lol
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Old 05-24-05, 07:19 PM   #8
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...mike jones....

back then they didnt want me, now im hot they all on me
back then they didnt want me, now im hot they all on me
back then they didnt want me, now im hot they all on me
back then they didnt want me, now im hot they all on me
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Old 05-24-05, 07:20 PM   #9
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wow that's funny...how i get kicked out of the songs forum for freeposting but none of u guys did or will...i find that strange
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she sounds retarded who the fuck is that? and why do the previous posts say she sound good. ok anyways, the chorus is horrible at least hit one note correct. and fade this girl's singing or something it's annoying. this is not cd material. get a better singer first. no hate but Yahweh! shit's horrible what the fuck is the taste on this site. 2/10

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Old 05-24-05, 07:29 PM   #10
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^ lol i just find that funny as hell...
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Old 05-24-05, 10:38 PM   #11
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uppin this for more feedback
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she sounds retarded who the fuck is that? and why do the previous posts say she sound good. ok anyways, the chorus is horrible at least hit one note correct. and fade this girl's singing or something it's annoying. this is not cd material. get a better singer first. no hate but Yahweh! shit's horrible what the fuck is the taste on this site. 2/10

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Old 05-26-05, 10:26 AM   #12
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the first guy sounds really good.. nice lyrics, delivery is pretty good as well.. you sound gutter on this. second guy sound more relaxed on the mic, but your voice sounds nice on this beat. you sound like Lloyd Banks, your lyrics pretty good but your voice is a little low on this track. 3rd guy, nice start lol. you have a real nice constant flow.

overall i liked this drop, very nice of you three. nice collab and beat is perfect. good jobs boys. this site does have talent why somebody say it don't.
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Old 05-30-05, 01:16 AM   #13
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IIght..Remix Beat is Crazy...First Kid Is Good..My issue Wit his him,,Is that his delivery still needs work..He sometimes rushes his words..or has too many words in his bars..so tha flow can be a bit choppy..Hook is iight..Second Cat...Is real laid back..better flow than first cat...More good Lyrics Like tha first Cat...iight....Third Cat..flow is good..Lyrics Are Coo...More Why topics..Coo..Ya Fan Base that big..Damn..??..anyway..Quality a bit off...Keep Droppin Yall..E z..
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