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Old 06-23-05, 10:09 AM   #1
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bored freestyle(Fuck 50 cent)

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G-G-G-G-G-G-G-Unot!!!!

ill admit it...50 cent you started hot
but now u act like the retarded pac
runin around dissin just for hype
dissin peeps cause ya cant write
a 16 with out sayin somes name
first it was ja then jada joe now game
u got mad cause he aint all on ya dick
now u gota deal with bloodz and crips
how much help is gonna be ya magic stick
ya moms got poped...damn what tragic shit
but shes probably rollin over in her grave
cause u used them bullets to get made
every track says u got shot ight we got it
come on u never pumped crack be honest
cause u snitched any real street dude
dont respect ya crew cause we see thourgh
ya fake crew g-unit's finna beg for mercy
merkin this wanksta is just a courtsey
cause what hes sayin aint really factuall
what?you wrote half of games album thats laughable
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Old 06-23-05, 10:30 AM   #2
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uppin................................
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Old 06-23-05, 10:37 AM   #3
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Haha aiite shit homie.....this kl....all the shit u wrote was tru tho.....50 is played............RTF to 2 links in my sig....cos i left feed on the other OM u got up ATM
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Old 06-23-05, 11:05 AM   #4
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uppin.....................
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Old 06-23-05, 11:24 AM   #5
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this shit was nice homie keep doing ya thang.Pretty basic but good enuff to be a diss verse on a track. peep my OM's in my Sig and the link imma about to drop. Everything on ya verse was on point. Nothing two special and nuffin damaged it so i give it a 7/10

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Old 06-23-05, 07:07 PM   #6
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flow sucks, nice structure, nice personals...not bad punch's...keystyle so prett good
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Old 06-23-05, 07:19 PM   #7
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The entire piece sucks. Dissing commercial artists is fucking stupid when your on the internet. Your a dumb fuck.
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Old 06-23-05, 08:40 PM   #8
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Propainz you the dumbfuck riding 50's dick....u a muthafuckin punk...have u fuckin forgot that u on the fuckin net too and besides true emcees just write shit for oursleves and we just choose to just release it on the net...stop being a fuckin faggot

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Old 06-23-05, 11:20 PM   #9
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#1......mean wut u say and say wut u mean, if u gon shit on somebody don't go back and edit it

#2.....if u write somethin for yourself PLEASE PLEAAAAASE keep it to yourself-especially if it's this terrible. in my opinion you dissed 50 with some CURRENT 50 type shit.It was weak from top to bottom. Similar to 50, it had no flow.i'm not hatin on you or him..i mean hell i aint got a problem wit eitha of you but this shit was ridiculous.tha only thing worse than reading this is havin sex wit Star Jones(which really aint that bad considerin she lost some weight AND she got money) next time you diss PLEASE make it worth reading. thank you
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Old 06-23-05, 11:27 PM   #10
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mY GOODNESS......no hate and all...but this was horrible.Flow sucked,punches.....well there was none.The disses were as uncreative and simple as it gets.That shit suked.
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Old 06-24-05, 02:06 AM   #11
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Originally Posted by .:F.ate:.
#1......mean wut u say and say wut u mean, if u gon shit on somebody don't go back and edit it

#2.....if u write somethin for yourself PLEASE PLEAAAAASE keep it to yourself-especially if it's this terrible. in my opinion you dissed 50 with some CURRENT 50 type shit.It was weak from top to bottom. Similar to 50, it had no flow.i'm not hatin on you or him..i mean hell i aint got a problem wit eitha of you but this shit was ridiculous.tha only thing worse than reading this is havin sex wit Star Jones(which really aint that bad considerin she lost some weight AND she got money) next time you diss PLEASE make it worth reading. thank you


first off if some faggot newbie like you got sumthin ta say..pleeeaaazzzz keep it to you or ur queer boyfriend.....2nd off if ur talkin bout me editing it only was ta fuckin fix the spellin errors, bitch
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