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06-24-05, 11:35 AM
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Hate Me?
IP: 5285 DC82
hate me?
You can never decease whats never realesed
I can sever the beast with the weather at least right or wrong combination I was born apon the nation i been sworn up on probation while I yarn at your playstation I got da next level never respect devils so I let the set prevail if we fail to set sail,will a vet bail or fail? gail force winds never set me back a step listen close to a fiend a find were the crack is kept all rv lack is deph,plus a little respect no neglect for those who lept to a mod status im apon greatest,Im a don haters try to pawn natives I was born fateless,created my own destiny Only gods testing me with each lesson's fee please stay blessing me take agression see Im uncontrolable yet vast at the best and laugh at the rest you see me at the top? none a my staff have a vest you know some act dope while i use my craft at the best take this as lyrical warfare,Im a myrical storm here the variable whores near,so you better get your gear sacrafice what you dont need,no greed jus' help feed spreads words fuck these dead herbs tryna spread thirds I got half staying double your amount, you got no lyrical funds like I trouble your account hate me?
Ysdat, Fi-Del,@. TC THE MOTHER FUCKING COUNCIL STILL TOPPING YALL FAKE FUCKS! |
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06-24-05, 11:39 AM
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IP: 2862 CD33
nice rhnyming scheme. nice emotion and wording. Needs some work in flow and if that is the problem post it poetic scriptures. but this was a beautfiul peice.
RTF or else...
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06-24-05, 12:03 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
drunk keys never seem to flow.hahahahah
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06-24-05, 12:04 PM
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IP: C90A 21C2
RTF hoe.... Cuz the collab was hot,
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06-24-05, 12:33 PM
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IP: 775C 64E4
the flow was off a bit...but the rhyme scheme was good... the multis DID help flow flow though....
the emotion was there... not a bad peace at all... Not a GREAT peace but it was good... Id say work on flow and structure on this peace and thats about it... everything else was up to par...
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